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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes I have the bike. When I was child my parents bought for me to practice balance and made me gain the BI bicycle skill.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because I saw lots of people ride a bike to. Work rather than instead of walking, walking.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 46.0

Gợi ý: 用更自然和语法正确的句子回答,先直接回应问题,然后用1–2句具体细节补充。注意时态要一致(过去时),避免多余或不清楚的词语,使用连接词使句子连贯。例如:先说“是的,我有一辆自行车”,然后说明是谁买的、目的和学到的技能。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small bike when I was five so I could learn to balance. With their help I soon learned how to ride without training wheels and felt very proud.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更流畅并使用更准确的表达。先给出直接观点,然后用1–2个具体原因支持。注意连词和重复词的使用,避免句子断裂或重复。比如说明在城市里骑行通勤普遍、方便且环保。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for commuting. In crowded cities riding a bike is often faster than walking or taking a car, and it's an inexpensive, eco-friendly option.

Ngữ pháp

22: Article errors

× Yes I have the bike.

Yes, I had a bike.

原句中有多处问题。首先,回答过去是否拥有某物,应使用过去时“had”,而不是现在时“have”。其次,使用不定冠词或不加冠词更自然,除非特指某辆车。原句“The bike”暗示特指,但问题为一般性询问,改为“a bike”更合适;在此我将根据时态直接改为“I had a bike”。建议:回答过去的拥有关系时使用过去时(had);若非指特定物品,用不定冠词 a/an 或省略冠词视语境。

6: Present tense issue

× When I was child my parents bought for me to practice balance and made me gain the BI bicycle skill.

When I was a child, my parents bought one for me to practice balance and helped me learn how to ride a bicycle.

原句主要有时态与表达不自然的问题。句首已有过去时(When I was a child),主句也应保持过去时;原句“bought for me”缺少宾语,应为“bought one for me”。“made me gain the BI bicycle skill”表达不地道,改为“helped me learn how to ride a bicycle”更自然且语法正确。建议:保持时态一致;买某物给某人用“bought one for me”;表示学会某技能用“learn how to ...”或“learn to ...”。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because I saw lots of people ride a bike to. Work rather than instead of walking, walking.

Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because I saw lots of people riding bikes to work rather than walking.

原句存在多处问题:1) 动词形式错误,应使用现在分词“riding”来表示一般观察(看到很多人骑车);2) “ride a bike to. Work”有不必要的句点和大小写错误,应为“riding bikes to work”;3) “rather than instead of walking, walking”重复且冗余,应只保留“rather than walking”。建议:用现在分词表示正在进行或常见行为(seeing people doing);避免重复短语“rather than”与“instead of”同时出现;注意标点和大小写。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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