Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid filler words (like, um, actually) and repetition. Keep answers to no more than five sentences and use a linking phrase (e.g., “because” or “so”) to connect reason and result.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rarely used it because I hadn’t learned to ride very well, so my parents mostly pushed me around the park. However, I practiced a little every weekend and gradually became more confident.

Gợi ý: Give a direct opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Reduce hesitations and use more precise vocabulary (e.g., “common,” “commute,” “reduce pollution”). Use linking words (for example, “because” and “for instance”) and correct grammar (e.g., “it reduces pollution”).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to commute to work or to run short errands because they are cheap and convenient; for instance, in my city many commuters prefer cycling to avoid traffic, and this also reduces air pollution.

× Yeah, actually I when I was a child, I had a bike, but actually I didn't use it very, very often because like I didn't know how to drive it. But at that time back then.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I had a bike, but I didn't use it very often because I didn't know how to ride it.

This sentence has several structure and word-choice issues (Grammar problem type ID 26). Remove redundant fillers ('actually', 'like', 'but at that time back then') and fix verb choice: English speakers say 'ride a bike' not 'drive it'. Also streamline word order: 'Yes, when I was a child I had a bike' is clearer than 'I when I was a child, I had a bike'. Suggestions: omit unnecessary discourse markers, place clauses in logical order, and use 'ride' for bicycles.

× Yeah, and my country actually, umm, the bikes are uh, more common, uh, and uh, some uh, people use it to go to work or uh, places, uh, and new places, uh, but uh, in my opinion, uh, it's a very, uh, essential idea to use bike in our country because it's reduce pollution.

✓ Yes, in my country bikes are more common, and some people use them to go to work or to other places. In my opinion, using bikes is very important in our country because they reduce pollution.

This contains subject-verb agreement and pronoun number errors (Grammar problem type ID 27 and ID 12). 'Some people use it' is wrong because 'people' is plural; use 'them'. 'Use bike' is ungrammatical; use 'using bikes' or 'use bikes'. 'It's reduce pollution' is incorrect: the subject 'they' (bikes) requires the plural verb 'reduce'. Suggestions: match singular/plural consistently, replace 'it' with 'them' for plural antecedents, and use gerund 'using' when stating general opinions about activities. Additionally, remove filler words for clarity.