Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yeah, of course. To be honest, I don't like.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Sure, there's no doubt that umm, there is so popular in our country because it, uh, beneficial to our environment.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够直接和相关。首先,题问的是过去是否拥有自行车,考生应直接陈述(有/没有)并给出简短理由或描述。答案应自然、完整并避免自相矛盾(开头说“有”,随后又说“不喜欢”但未说明对象)。建议用一到两句话交代是否有车,并用1-2句补充细节,如什么时候有、是谁给的、你如何使用它等,使用连词使语流更连贯。注意时态一致和清晰表达态度。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a blue bicycle from when I was about eight; my parents bought it for me and I used it to ride to school and visit friends every weekend.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答传达了大致意思,但表达不够流利,充满犹豫词且语法有误(例如“there is so popular”不正确)。建议先给出直接观点,然后用一到两句具体原因支持(如环保、经济、交通便利),并用连接词(because, so, therefore, for example)使结构清晰。避免过多的填充词,注意主谓一致和形容词/副词的正确使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and environmentally friendly. For example, many people use bikes for short trips in cities since they avoid traffic and save money on fuel.
× Yeah, of course. To be honest, I don't like.
✓ Yeah, of course. To be honest, I didn't.
语法问题类型对应:5(Past tense issue)和26(Sentence structure errors)。学生在回答关于过去是否有自行车的问题(Did you have... when you were a child?)时,应该使用过去时。原句“I don't like.”是现在时且不完整(后面应接宾语或不定式),并且语义不符合问题。正确的简短回答是“I didn't.”(即“I didn't have one.”的缩略),表示过去没有。改进建议:当回答过去的经历问题时,使用过去时;要说“没有自行车”可以完整说“I didn't have a bike.” 或简短“Yes, I did.” / “No, I didn't.”。
× Sure, there's no doubt that umm, there is so popular in our country because it, uh, beneficial to our environment.
✓ Sure, there's no doubt that bikes are very popular in my country because they are beneficial to the environment.
语法问题类型对应:26(Sentence structure errors)、27(Subject-verb agreement errors)、11(Incorrect use of prepositions/structure)与13(Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs)。原句中“there is so popular”结构错误:‘there is’后面应该接名词短语而不是形容词比较结构;此外“it beneficial”缺少系动词(is),且代词‘it’指代不清,应使用复数代词‘they’来指代bikes。修正后使用“bikes are very popular”或“they are very popular”,并在理由从句中使用完整结构“they are beneficial”。改进建议:注意“there is/there are”后接名词(存在句),描述事物属性时用主系表结构(主语 + be + 表语);保持代词与先行词数一致(bike/bikes → it/they)。另外“so popular”口语可用,但更标准的是“very popular”或在口语中说“so popular”时需与形容词连用在主语之后(e.g. They are so popular)。