Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No actually, because my hometown city is full of mountains so it's not quite flat. The majority of people there do not use bike as a daily transportation tool, so I don't. I didn't know how to ride back one.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Uh, actually not so much if I compare the country of Netherlands, because in our country most people will choose a motorbike or E bikes other than pure bike due to high efficiency.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答較自然,但有語法與用詞錯誤與冗長。建議:1) 開頭直接給出主題句(肯定或否定),避免多次否定式重複;2) 修正語法錯誤(如 “ride back one” 應為 “ride one” 或 “ride a bike”);3) 使用連接詞使句子更流暢(例如 “because” + 結果);4) 控制在最多五句內並增加具體細節(如年齡、代步方式)。示例句子應保持自然簡潔。
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t. I grew up in a very hilly town where cycling was impractical, so most families relied on scooters or buses. I never learned to ride a bike, and even now I prefer public transport for its convenience.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答有清晰觀點,但句子結構與用詞可改進。建議:1) 去掉口頭語(如 “uh”)以顯得更自信;2) 調整比較結構(例如 “compared to the Netherlands”);3) 用更準確的詞彙(例如 “e-bikes” 而非 “E bikes”,用 “convenience” 或 “efficiency” 作為原因並具體說明);4) 可補充具體例子或數據以增強說服力。保持不超過五句。
Ví dụ: Not really. Compared to the Netherlands, cycling is less common here because many people prefer motorbikes or e-bikes for their speed and convenience. In cities, e-bikes are especially popular for commuting short distances.
× The majority of people there do not use bike as a daily transportation tool, so I don't.
✓ The majority of people there do not use bikes as a daily means of transportation, so I didn't.
问题类型:名词单复数错误。原句中“use bike”中的“bike”应为复数“bikes”,因为“majority of people”表示许多人,后面要用复数名词。建议:遇到表示多数或复数主体时,名词通常用复数形式;把“transportation tool”改为更自然的短语“means of transportation”。
× I didn't know how to ride back one.
✓ I didn't know how to ride one back then.
问题类型:过去时与语序错误。原句“ride back one”语序不当且“back”位置不正确。使用过去时“didn't know”时,时间点应用“back then”或“when I was a child”。建议:把副词放在句末或靠近时间短语,改成“I didn't know how to ride one back then.”或“I didn't know how to ride a bike when I was a child.”
× Uh, actually not so much if I compare the country of Netherlands, because in our country most people will choose a motorbike or E bikes other than pure bike due to high efficiency.
✓ Uh, actually not so much if I compare it to the Netherlands, because in our country most people choose a motorbike or e-bikes rather than pure bikes due to higher efficiency.
问题类型:冠词与表达用法错误。原句中“the country of Netherlands”表达不自然,应改为“the Netherlands”或“the country of the Netherlands”。另外“E bikes”与“pure bike”需统一复数形式和连字符(e-bikes);“rather than”比“other than”更自然。动词时态从“will choose”改为一般现在时“choose”,因为这是习惯性事实。建议:使用固定搭配“The Netherlands”,名词复数一致,并用一般现在时描述习惯性行为。