Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific supporting details, and finish with a short concluding remark. Use linking words (for example, 'once' or 'because') correctly and avoid repetition and unfinished fragments. Also correct grammatical errors (e.g., tense consistency, remove duplicate words like 'I I'm').

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it every day around my neighborhood, and once I fell and had to go to the hospital because I skidded on gravel. That incident stayed with me, and I still keep the bike in my garage as a memento.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer, then add one or two specific supporting points with linking words (e.g., 'for example', 'because'). Avoid vague quantifiers and incomplete sentences. Correct grammar and word choice ('especially', 'adults', 'each person has at least one bike'). Finish the thought about cultural change rather than trailing off.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in my area. For example, many families own one or two bicycles, and cycling has increased because it is affordable and convenient. Also, more women ride bikes now, whereas in the past it was less common due to social traditions.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I used to play a lot with a bike and I got hurt once.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I used to play a lot with it; I got hurt once.

The sentence mixes clauses without proper connectors and repeats 'a bike'. Use past simple and 'used to' correctly for past habits. Replace the second 'a bike' with pronoun 'it' for cohesion and add punctuation to separate ideas.

× I remember it was really memorable, almost like I was when I had to go to hospital because of that bike.

✓ I remember it very well; it was so memorable that I had to go to the hospital because of that bike.

The original is awkward and ungrammatical ('almost like I was when I had to go to hospital'). Rephrase to show cause and effect: 'so memorable that' and include the article 'the' before 'hospital' for natural English.

× And I I'm grown up.

✓ And I am grown up now.

Use correct present form 'I am' rather than 'I I'm' (redundant). Adding 'now' clarifies current state. Alternatively 'I have grown up' could be used for change over time.

× I still have that bike in my garage.

✓ I still have that bike in my garage.

This sentence is grammatically correct; it uses the present simple appropriately to state a current possession. No change needed.

× Yes, in my country, specially in my area, all the young to adults everyone is having each one bike at least if not they're having 2-3 bikes at house and which is really cool.

✓ Yes, in my country, especially in my area, almost everyone from young people to adults has at least one bike; many even have two or three at home, which is really cool.

Multiple errors: 'specially' should be 'especially'; awkward phrase 'all the young to adults everyone' should be 'almost everyone from young people to adults'; 'is having' is wrong—use simple present 'has' for general truths (subject-verb agreement); 'each one bike' -> 'one bike'; 'at house' -> 'at home'. Use punctuation to separate clauses.

× Though even girls are also riding these days.

✓ Even girls are riding bikes these days.

Redundant 'though' and 'also' together is awkward; use 'Even girls are riding bikes these days.' The present continuous 'are riding' is acceptable to indicate a trend. Ensure subject-verb agreement and concise phrasing.

× Before it was tradition not to ride a bike for women but it's.

✓ Before, it was traditional for women not to ride bikes, but that is changing now.

Original ends abruptly ('but it's.'). Use 'traditional' not 'tradition' for adjective, and 'for women not to ride bikes' is clearer. Finish the contrast with 'but that is changing now' to complete the thought.