Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural, grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and possessives, and avoid repetition. Add one or two specific supporting details connected by a linking word (for example, “because” or “so”). Keep the answer to no more than five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My uncle gave it to me as a birthday present, and I rode it home from the shop. After school I would cycle around the neighborhood with my friends, so we often spent hours playing outside. I loved the freedom it gave me.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear opinion, avoid hesitations, and use correct grammar and linking words to explain reasons. Provide one specific reason or example (e.g., traffic, infrastructure, culture) and limit to three or four sentences for clarity.

Ví dụ: Not really — bicycles are not very popular in my country. Most people prefer public transport because it is faster and more convenient in cities, and there is limited cycling infrastructure. As a result, few people cycle for daily commuting.

× I got that bike from one of my uncle.

✓ I got that bike from one of my uncles.

The preposition 'from' is fine, but the noun phrase 'one of my uncle' is incorrect because 'one of' must be followed by a plural noun. Change 'uncle' to the plural 'uncles' to match 'one of'. Suggestion: use 'one of my uncles' or 'my uncle' depending on intended meaning.

× I used to ride my bicycle when I come after the school.

✓ I used to ride my bicycle when I came home from school.

The phrase 'used to' expresses a past habit, so the subordinate clause should use past tense 'came', not present 'come'. Also 'after the school' is unnatural; use 'home from school' or 'after school'. Suggestion: match past habit with past tense and prefer 'home from school' or 'after school'.

× I really love to ride the bicycle.

✓ I really loved riding the bicycle.

Context is past habit (childhood), so verb tense should be past: 'loved'. Also English often uses the gerund 'riding' after 'love' when talking about activities. The definite article 'the' is acceptable if referring to that specific bike; 'my bicycle' is better if you mean your own bike. Suggestion: 'I really loved riding my bicycle.' or 'I really loved riding the bicycle.'.

× I think, uh, not much because all the people used to go from the public transport.

✓ I don't think so, because most people used public transport.

The original mixes present opinion 'I think' with an awkward following structure. To express that bikes are not very popular, say 'I don't think so' or 'I think not much.' 'All the people' is unnatural; use 'most people'. 'Used to go from the public transport' is incorrect: use 'used public transport' for past habitual action or 'use public transport' for general present. Here 'are popular' is present, so use present: 'most people use public transport.' Suggestion: Choose consistent tense and natural quantifiers: 'I don't think so, because most people use public transport.'.

× So bicycles are not popular in our street and the country also.

✓ So bicycles are not popular on our street or in the country.

Use 'on our street' rather than 'in our street'. Also 'and the country also' is awkward; use 'or in the country' or 'nor in the country'. Keep parallel prepositional phrases and natural word order. Suggestion: '...not popular on our street or in the country.'.

× So I think they are so easy to go with the public transport.

✓ So I think it is much easier to travel by public transport.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and word choice. 'They are so easy to go with the public transport' is ungrammatical. Use 'it is easier to travel by public transport' to express that using public transport is a simpler option. Use 'travel by' or 'go by' with 'public transport'. Suggestion: 'I think it is much easier to travel by public transport.'.