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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I don't have a bike when I was child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes I do, even a child now already have a bike since they were kid.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Correct the grammar and make your answer natural and slightly longer (max 5 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two brief supporting details using linking words. For example, use past tense: "I didn’t have a bike when I was a child." Then add a reason or consequence: "because my family lived in a small apartment and my parents preferred to buy other things for me." Use linking words such as "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a small apartment and we didn’t have space to store one. As a result, I mostly walked or used public transport to go to school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, clarity and provide a specific reason or example. Start with a clear topic sentence: "Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country." Then add a supporting detail with a linking word (e.g., "because", "for example"). Be specific about who uses bikes and why (commuting, exercise, affordability). Keep it within 1–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many children and adults ride bikes to school or the market, especially in suburban areas.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× No, I don't have a bike when I was child.

No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense ('don't have') with past-time expression ('when I was...'). Use past simple 'didn't have' for a past situation. Also add the article 'a' before 'child'. Suggestion: use 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

Present tense issue

× Yes I do, even a child now already have a bike since they were kid.

Yes, I do. Even children now already have bikes since they were kids.

This sentence has several issues: tense and number agreement. 'I do' is acceptable to answer the question, but the following clause speaks about 'a child' generally, so use plural 'children' and plural 'bikes' for general statements. 'Have' must agree with plural subject: 'children ... have'. Also 'since they were kid' is incorrect: use plural 'kids' and 'since' requires a point in time; better phrasing is 'since they were kids' or 'from a young age.' Suggested corrected sentence: 'Yes, I do. Even children now already have bikes since they were kids.'

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