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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child. I had it for five years.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

No, I don't. I think that bikes are not popular in my country because there are too much vehicles, for example cars and trains. Uh, that makes people to be in condition when they hear rather choose car.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: Ответ был понятным и прямым, но можно сделать его более естественным и разнообразным. Избегайте повторов (например, повторного упоминания «I had a bike») и добавьте одно-два уточняющих подробности (например, какой он был, где вы катались), используя связку для плавности.

Ví dụ: Yes — I did. I owned a blue bicycle throughout my childhood and used it for about five years. I often rode it around my neighborhood and to school, which helped me become more independent.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит грамматические и лексические ошибки, а также неясную логику. В русском: исправьте согласование (например, «there are too many vehicles»), используйте связующие слова для логики и приведите конкретные причины и примеры. Постройте предложение ясно: сначала общий вывод, затем 1–2 конкретные причины с примерами.

Ví dụ: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. This is mainly because cities are crowded with cars and public transport, so cycling can be inconvenient and sometimes unsafe. For example, many roads lack bike lanes, which discourages people from riding.

Ngữ pháp

'14:Incorrect use of quantifiers'

× 'I think that bikes are not popular in my country because there are too much vehicles, for example cars and trains.'

'I think that bikes are not popular in my country because there are too many vehicles, for example cars and trains.'

'Слово "much" используется с неисчисляемыми существительными; "vehicles" — исчисляемое множественное число, поэтому нужно использовать "many". Совет: используйте "many" с исчисляемыми существительными во множественном числе и "much" с неисчисляемыми.'},{

'11:Incorrect use of prepositions'

× 'Uh, that makes people to be in condition when they hear rather choose car.'

'Uh, that makes people be in a situation where they would rather choose a car.'

'Предлог "in" с существительным "condition" не подходит в данном контексте; правильно использовать "in a situation" или "in a position". Также конструкция "makes people to be" неверна — после "make" используется инфинитив без частицы to (make people do), но здесь лучше переформулировать: "makes people be in a situation where..." или еще лучше "causes people to prefer cars". Совет: используйте устойчивые сочетания, например "in a situation", и помните, что после "make" инфинитив без to.'}]}

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PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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