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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, it's very popular in my country. When I was a child, my friends and my classmates all have their bicycles.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 你重复了考官的问题,回答没有回应到内容,也没有提供任何细节或结构。改进时:直接用陈述句回答问题(给出主题句),然后用1-2句具体细节或例子支持,说清什么时候、什么样的自行车或与朋友的经历,使用连接词使句子连贯。注意控制在最多5句内,语言自然且有效。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle when I was about seven, and I rode it to school and around my neighborhood every day. I remember learning to balance with my father’s help, and by summer I could ride for miles with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接但有语法和细节问题。改进时:使用正确的主谓一致(bikes are, many people have),用连接词扩展理由或例子(for example, because, nowadays),提供具体原因或现象来支撑观点,并避免冗长重复。控制在最多5句。

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country, especially in small towns and cities. For example, when I was a child almost all my classmates owned bikes because they were affordable and convenient for short trips. Nowadays many people also cycle for exercise or to avoid traffic.

Ngữ pháp

Third person singular issue

× Yes, it's very popular in my country.

Yes, they're very popular in my country.

原句中谈论的是“bikes”(复数),但使用的是“it's”(it is,单数),主谓不一致。应该使用复数代词和动词形式“they're”(they are)。建议:说到复数名词时,主语和谓语也要用复数形式,例如:"Bikes are popular." 或 "They're very popular."

Past tense issue

× When I was a child, my friends and my classmates all have their bicycles.

When I was a child, my friends and my classmates all had their bicycles.

句子是在描述过去的情况("When I was a child"),所以谓语动词应使用过去时。原句使用现在时“have”,与时间状语不一致。建议:遇到明确的过去时间表达时(如"when I was...", "last year"等),将动词改为过去时,如这里把"have"改为过去式"had"。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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