Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. I went to school by bike, always.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Well, the buys are essential transport. In many Chinese family people always go to school or go to work by bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且简短,但语言有改进空间。应更自然地组织句子,使用主题句后补充具体细节,并避免过度绝对化(如“always”可能不真实)。可以加一两句说明骑车上学的频率、路线或感受,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。注意语法和词汇准确性(例如将“by bike”放在合适位置)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I usually rode my bike to school because it was only about ten minutes away. Sometimes I rode with friends, which made the trip fun, and in bad weather I took the bus instead.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 内容相关但存在明显语法和用词错误(例如“buys”应为“bikes”或“bicycles”,句子结构也不够自然)。应先给出总体观点,然后用一到两条具体理由或例子支持,使用连接词提高逻辑性。避免绝对词如“always”,用更准确的频率词或条件描述。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are still quite common, especially in smaller cities and among students. For example, many people use bikes for short trips to school or the market because they are cheap and convenient.
× Well, the buys are essential transport.
✓ Well, bikes are an essential form of transport.
错误类型:可数名词单复数与拼写错误。 说明:原句中用的是“the buys”,一是拼写错误(应为bikes),二是名词与限定词搭配不当。直接说“bikes are essential transport”在英语中不够自然,通常用“an essential form of transport”或“an essential means of transport”。建议:写作时检查单词拼写;表达“某物是重要的交通方式”时常用“an essential form/means of transport”。
× In many Chinese family people always go to school or go to work by bike.
✓ In many Chinese families, people always go to school or work by bike.
错误类型:介词/名词短语使用错误与复数问题。 说明:原句中“family”应该用复数“families”来表示“许多家庭”,且在“people”前应加逗号分隔;另外“go to school or go to work”中第二个动词不必重复“go to”,可简化为“go to school or work”。建议:复数可数名词表泛指时用复数;并注意句子流畅,可省略重复动词。