Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. If my memory serves me correctly, I remember my father bought me a bike when I was in grade 5 and I think this bag is very cute and lovely. It had pink color.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Certainly there are many people ride bikes to work and also they use bike to exercise. For example, when I walk in the park, I often see many people riding bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并保持简洁,避免无关信息和重复。开头直接回答问题,然后给出一到两句具体细节(例如哪种自行车、谁买的、何时使用),并使用连词使衔接自然。注意词汇搭配(应说 “pink” 或 “pink color” 前加定冠词/形容词短语),句子不宜过长。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father bought me a small pink bicycle when I was in fifth grade, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood every day. It had a comfortable seat and a basket on the front, which made it really fun to use.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答应更自然、语法更准确,并用连接词丰富细节。先给出总体观点,再用具体例子或数据支持。注意主谓一致和可数名词的复数形式,并使用常见搭配(例如 “ride bikes”, “ride a bike”, “riding bikes”)。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride bikes to commute to work because it's cheap and convenient, and others cycle for exercise — for instance, I often see dozens of cyclists in the park on weekends.
× Certainly there are many people ride bikes to work and also they use bike to exercise.
✓ Certainly there are many people riding bikes to work and also they use bikes to exercise.
错误类型:动词现在分词形式(Grammar Problem Type ID 10)。问题在于在“people”之后应使用现在分词“riding”构成正在做某事的短语(people riding bikes),而不是用一般现在时的动词原形“ride”。另外名词复数应统一,‘bike’应改为复数‘bikes’以匹配复数主语‘people’。建议:在表示“许多人做某事”时,用“people + -ing”结构;注意可数名词与主语数的一致性。
× For example, when I walk in the park, I often see many people riding bike.
✓ For example, when I walk in the park, I often see many people riding bikes.
错误类型:动词现在分词形式(Grammar Problem Type ID 10)与名词复数。句中“riding bike”应为“riding bikes”,动名词短语后面的可数名词需用复数形式以与“many people”对应。建议:将可数名词改为复数,写成“riding bikes”。
× If my memory serves me correctly, I remember my father bought me a bike when I was in grade 5 and I think this bag is very cute and lovely.
✓ If my memory serves me correctly, I remember my father bought me a bike when I was in grade 5, and I think this bike is very cute and lovely.
错误类型:单复数或用词混淆(Grammar Problem Type ID 1)。句中原写“this bag is very cute”与上下文不一致:前文说的是父亲买了一辆自行车(a bike),随后不应突然写成“bag(包)”。应与前文保持一致,改为“this bike”。建议:注意代词或名词的前后呼应,确保指代一致;检查是否打字错误。