Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문법과 문장 연결을 개선하세요. 과거 경험을 말할 때는 과거 시제를 사용하고, 문장을 명확하게 조직해야 합니다. 예를 들어, 'I had a bike when I was younger'처럼 주제 문장으로 시작하고, 이유나 결과를 덧붙일 때는 'however', 'so' 같은 연결어를 사용하세요. 또한 불분명한 단어(예: 'bug', 'four weeks', 'Dele', 'deleting 2 wheels')를 명확히 하고 간결하게 표현하세요. 구체적인 시간이나 사건(언제, 얼마나 오래, 왜 탈 수 없었는지)을 추가하면 더 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, I couldn't ride it for long because I fell and damaged it after about four weeks, so my parents removed the wheels and I stopped using it.

Gợi ý: 명확한 표현과 연결어 사용을 연습하세요. 현재 일반적인 사실을 말할 때는 단순 현재 시제를 사용하고, 의견과 이유를 연결할 때는 'because', 'but', 'however' 등을 사용하세요. 어색한 표현(예: 'like you ride a bike', 'free time' 복수/단수 일치)과 불필요한 길게 늘이는 말('umm')을 피하세요. 또한 구체적인 문제(예: 도로 상태, 전용 자전거도로 부족)를 언급하면 답변이 더 설득력 있어집니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. However, there are not many good-quality bike lanes, so it can be unsafe or inconvenient to cycle in some areas.

× Yes, when I was younger I have.

✓ Yes, when I was younger I had.

This sentence uses present tense 'have' with a past time marker 'when I was younger', which is inconsistent. Use past tense 'had' to match the time frame: 'I had.' Suggestion: match verb tense to time expressions (use past tense for past time references).

× I had a bug with four weeks but I couldn't ride a bike after.

✓ I had a bike for four weeks, but I couldn't ride it afterward.

The original has 'bug' instead of 'bike' (typo) and awkward preposition 'with four weeks'. Use 'for four weeks' to indicate duration. Also 'after' at end is informal; 'afterward' or 'after that' is clearer. Include the object pronoun 'it' for 'ride it.' Suggestion: use correct vocabulary, 'for' for durations, and include pronouns when needed. Note: This correction addresses preposition use and sentence structure.

× Dele after deleting 2 wheels.

✓ They removed the two training wheels afterward.

The original is unintelligible: 'Dele' is likely meant to be 'they' and 'deleting 2 wheels' should be 'removed the two training wheels.' Use past tense 'removed' to match past narrative and spell out numbers in formal speech. Suggestion: clarify subject, use correct past verb and proper noun phrase 'training wheels.'

× Yes, many people like you ride a bike when they have a free time, but we don't have umm good quality ride bike way so it's hard to find.

✓ Yes, many people like to ride a bike when they have free time, but we don't have good-quality bike lanes, so they are hard to find.

Several issues: 'like you ride' mixes structures; use 'like to ride' or 'like riding.' 'a free time' is incorrect article use with 'free time' (no article). 'good quality ride bike way' is word order and vocabulary errors; 'good-quality bike lanes' is correct. Also make pronoun agreement and verb form consistent: 'they are hard to find' refers to lanes. Suggestions: use 'like to ride' or 'like riding', omit articles with uncountable nouns like 'free time', use correct compound nouns ('bike lanes') and hyphenate adjectives ('good-quality').