Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Perbaikan: Jawaban perlu waktu-verb yang benar dan dikembangkan menjadi satu kalimat topik yang jelas serta tambahan detail singkat. Gunakan past tense untuk pengalaman masa lalu dan tambahkan informasi spesifik (mis. siapa memberi, kapan, bagaimana sering digunakan). Hindari jawaban sangat singkat.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight years old, and my parents bought it for me as a birthday present. I used it almost every day to ride around my neighborhood with my friends, which helped me learn to balance and be more confident.

Gợi ý: Perbaikan: Jawaban perlu lebih jelas, ringkas, dan tata bahasa subjek-predikat konsisten (bikes -> they). Hindari pengulangan frasa. Berikan alasan yang lebih spesifik dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk koherensi (e.g., because, for example, moreover). Jelaskan apa itu "bike race" dan dampaknya pada popularitas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many communities organize an annual bike race that attracts thousands of participants and spectators. For example, the event raises awareness about cycling as a healthy and eco-friendly transport option, so more people choose bikes for short trips and leisure rides.

× Student: Yes, I have.

✓ Student: Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about a past situation ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the response should be in the past tense. 'Have' is present tense and incorrect here. Use the past auxiliary 'did' for short answers to past simple questions. Suggestion: answer 'Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had a bike.'

× Student: Uh, yes it is because bikes are popular in my country because they have a race, uh, bikes vehicle every single year.

✓ Student: Yes, they are, because bicycles are popular in my country; we hold a bike race every year.

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement and word choice. The initial 'yes it is' incorrectly uses singular 'it' with plural 'bikes'; use 'they are' to agree with plural noun. 'They have a race' is awkward and unclear; native phrasing is 'we hold a bike race every year' or 'there is a bike race every year.' Also 'bikes vehicle' is incorrect word pairing. Suggestion: use 'bicycles' or 'bikes' consistently and correct verb agreement: 'bikes are popular... we hold a bike race every year.'