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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

MMM, no, I didn't have a back when I was a child because I I don't learn it. I don't use it.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in my daily life I often see people use bike to travel and training.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 回答要直接且语法正确。你的回答存在词汇错误(back→bike),句子结构混乱和重复(I I),以及时态/表达不自然。建议:1) 开头直接表明事实,例如“I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.” 2) 用简洁的原因句补充细节,例如“I never learned to ride and my family didn’t own one.” 3) 避免重复,控制在2-3句内。练习时注意发音和连贯性。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I never learned to ride one, and my family didn’t own a bicycle, so I rarely had the chance to use one.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容基本可懂,但需改进语法、连词和细节以显得更自然。建议:1) 使用更自然的连接词如“because”后紧跟具体理由,并用复数或正确形式(use bikes/to travel and for training)。2) 增加一两条具体例子或对比以丰富内容(例如在城市里通勤、健身或环保原因)。3) 控制句子长度,不超过3-4句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because I often see people using them for commuting in cities and for exercise in parks. For example, many people cycle to work to avoid traffic, and weekend cycling clubs are common for fitness.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× MMM, no, I didn't have a back when I was a child because I I don't learn it. I don't use it.

No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't learn how to ride it and I didn't use one.

句子存在多处结构性和时态错误: 1) 原句将“bike”误写为“back”。应改为“bike”。 2) 因为描述的是过去的情况,主句和从句都应使用过去时,所以将“I don't learn it. I don't use it.”改为“didn't learn how to ride it and I didn't use one.” 使用过去时态保持时态一致。 3) 需要用短语“learn how to ride”来表达“学会骑(车)”,而不是单独用“learn it”。 4) 合并句子使表达更自然清晰。建议:讲过去经历时,主句和相关从句都用过去时,注意拼写并用恰当动词短语表达动作。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in my daily life I often see people use bike to travel and training.

Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in my daily life I often see people using bikes to travel and to train.

主要错误是介词和动词形式使用不当: 1) “see people use bike” 在英语中更自然的说法是“see people using bikes”或“see people use bikes”。需用复数“bikes”。 2) “to travel and training” 中“training”应与前面的不定式形式保持一致,改为不定式“to train”,或都使用动名词“travelling and training”。 3) 使用现在分词“using”可以表达“经常看到”的连续或习惯性动作。建议:注意名词单复数(bikes),以及并列动词形式保持一致(to travel and to train 或 travelling and training)。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BackRear; Reverse; Backward
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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