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Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Actually I can't ride bicycle, so I didn't have any bicycle when I was young and but the interesting thing is that I skipped the to learn but how to ride bicycle, but I can ride motorcycle now.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think many people ride bicycles in China because we the the government offers many rent by rented bicycles so we have access to ride.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 56.0

Gợi ý: 句子不连贯且有语法错误,表达不够简洁。回答应直接先给出主题句,然后用一两句补充细节并使用连接词使逻辑清楚。注意时态和动词形式(例如:could/couldn't, learn to ride, skipped learning)。建议用不超过五句来回答。示例要包含原因或对比以丰富内容。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bicycle when I was a child because I couldn’t ride one. I actually skipped learning to ride a bike when I was young, so my family never bought one for me. However, I learned to ride a motorcycle later, which I find easier. If I had learned earlier, I might have enjoyed cycling more.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 句子有重复和词序问题,细节不够具体。回答应先给出明确观点,然后用连接词和具体例子支持(例如共享单车、通勤或休闲使用、城市与农村差异)。注意避免重复词汇并使用恰当短语(e.g. bike-sharing services, rent bikes)。保持回答自然且句数不多于五句。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially in big cities. Thanks to bike-sharing services and convenient rental stations, many people use bikes for short commutes and errands. In addition, cycling is common for exercise and leisure in parks and suburban areas. As a result, bikes remain an important part of urban transport.

Ngữ pháp

8: Verb + -ing form

× Actually I can't ride bicycle, so I didn't have any bicycle when I was young and but the interesting thing is that I skipped the to learn but how to ride bicycle, but I can ride motorcycle now.

Actually I couldn't ride a bicycle, so I didn't have any when I was young. But the interesting thing is that I skipped learning how to ride a bicycle, and now I can ride a motorcycle.

错误类型:动词+ing形式和其他时态/结构问题。分析与建议:原句中“skipped the to learn but how to ride bicycle”结构不正确。动词“skip”后面若接动名词应为“skip learning ...”,因此应改为“skipped learning how to ride a bicycle”。此外,整体句子存在时态和助动词使用不当:第一部分应使用过去不能,即“couldn't ride a bicycle”;第二部分“didn't have any bicycle”可简化为“didn't have any”或“didn't have any bicycles”;需要在名词前加不定冠词“a bicycle”。把句子拆成两句或用连词并列可以使表达更清楚。建议多练习动词后接动名词或不定式的用法(例如:skip + -ing;decide to + 动词原形),并注意情态动词在过去时用couldn't而不是 can't。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, I think many people ride bicycles in China because we the the government offers many rent by rented bicycles so we have access to ride.

Yes, I think many people ride bicycles in China because the government offers many rental bicycles for rent, so we have easy access to ride.

错误类型:介词和搭配使用不当。分析与建议:原句中“we the the government offers many rent by rented bicycles”词序混乱且搭配错误。应使用“the government offers many rental bicycles”或“there are many rental bikes provided by the government”。短语“rent by rented bicycles”不合语法,正确表达是“rental bicycles”或“bicycles for rent”。此外“we have access to ride”也不自然,改为“we have easy access to ride”或“we have access to them”更地道。建议学习常见名词搭配(如 rental bicycles / bikes for rent / provided by)和介词短语结构,并注意主语与动词的一致性。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

InterestingAbsorbing
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
YoungYouthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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