Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, avoid repetition, use a clear topic sentence then one or two supporting details. Use linking words (for example, 'so' or 'because') correctly and check grammar (prepositions and verb forms). Aim for natural phrasing and correct word order.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it to commute to and from school every day, so it was very convenient for short journeys. It was a Honda 125cc, and I enjoyed riding it because it was reliable and easy to park.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear main idea followed by specific reasons and avoid repetitive sentence starters. Use cohesive linking words (for example, 'because', 'therefore', 'as a result') and more precise vocabulary (e.g., 'affordable' instead of 'less price'). Keep answers within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because cars are expensive and many people cannot afford them. As a result, motorcycles are the most affordable option for middle-class families and commuters. Therefore, a large proportion of people own bikes and use them for daily travel.

× So during my school life I was commuting from my place to a school and from back to school from my house in a bike on a bike.

✓ So during my school life I commuted from my house to school and back on a bike.

The original uses progressive past 'was commuting' incorrectly for a habitual action in the past; simple past 'commuted' is appropriate. 'From my place to a school and from back to school from my house' is redundant and awkward; simplify to 'from my house to school and back'. Also use 'on a bike' rather than 'in a bike'.

× And I love to ride the bike.

✓ And I loved riding the bike.

The context is past (childhood), so present 'love' is inconsistent; use past 'loved' or past continuous/habitual. Also 'ride the bike' can be more natural as 'riding the bike'.

× I had a Honda bike and it was of 125CC and I used to I I love to ride it and it was.

✓ I had a Honda bike that was 125 cc, and I used to love riding it.

The original is disfluent with repetitions and mixed tenses. Use 'that was 125 cc' to describe the bike, and 'used to love riding it' to express a past habitual feeling. Remove repeated words and the trailing 'and it was'.

× So vehicles are a little expensive in my country and they are out of budget for so many people.

✓ Vehicles are a bit expensive in my country and are out of reach for many people.

'So vehicles are a little expensive' is wordy; use 'Vehicles are a bit expensive'. 'Out of budget' is unnatural; 'out of reach' or 'beyond the budget' is preferable. Keep present simple for general facts.

× So the bike is the only vehicle which has less price and it is affordable by the middle class.

✓ So the bike is the only vehicle that costs less and is affordable for the middle class.

'Which has less price' is ungrammatical; use 'that costs less' or 'cheaper'. 'Affordable by' is incorrect; use 'affordable for' or 'affordable to'. Also 'the bike' should be 'a bike' if speaking generally, but context implies general category so 'the bike' can be improved to 'bikes'.

× So a lot of people own the bike in my country and they just love to ride it.

✓ So a lot of people own bikes in my country and they just love riding them.

When speaking about many people owning this type of vehicle, use plural 'bikes' rather than singular 'the bike'. Pronoun must agree in number: use 'them' to refer to 'bikes'. 'Love to ride it' becomes 'love riding them' for naturalness.