Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and grammatical, start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid unnecessary words and keep it under five sentences. Correct the tense and phrasing (e.g., “My father gave it to me on my second birthday”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father gave me a small black bike for my second birthday, and I used to ride it in the park near our house. It was lightweight and had training wheels, so I learned to balance quickly.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer, then give specific reasons and use linking words to organize your points. Replace vague phrases like “according to my perspective” and avoid absolutes like “everyone.” Provide concise, concrete examples (commute, delivery services) and keep it within five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes and motorcycles are very popular in my country. This is because they are cheaper to buy and easier to park, so many people use them for commuting and running errands. For example, delivery riders and office workers often prefer motorcycles to avoid traffic congestion.

× There was given by my father on my 2nd birthday and it was of black color.

✓ It was given to me by my father on my second birthday, and it was black.

The original sentence misuses 'There was' which is incorrect for passive gifting; use a clear subject 'It' and passive 'was given to me'. Also 'on my 2nd birthday' should use 'second' in words and 'of black color' is unnatural in English — use 'it was black'. Combine clauses with a comma and 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'It was given to me by my father on my second birthday, and it was black.'

× There was given by my father on my 2nd birthday and it was of black color.

✓ It was given to me by my father on my second birthday, and it was black.

The phrase 'given by my father on my 2nd birthday' needs the indirect object 'to me' after 'given'. Also 'of black color' uses an unnecessary prepositional phrase; use the adjective 'black'. Use 'second' instead of '2nd' in formal speech. Suggestion: Include the recipient: 'given to me'.

× There was given by my father on my 2nd birthday and it was of black color.

✓ It was given to me by my father on my second birthday, and it was black.

Using 'my 2nd birthday' is acceptable in speech but in writing 'my second birthday' is preferred. There is no article needed before 'black' when describing color. Make ordinal words consistent and avoid unnecessary articles. Use 'second' and omit 'of' before the color description.

× Well yes, according to my perspective, bikes and motorcycles are most popular in my country as everyone is using those for their work or any kind of other activities.

✓ Well, yes. From my perspective, bikes and motorcycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for work and other activities.

The original mixes tenses and has awkward phrasing. 'According to my perspective' is unidiomatic; use 'From my perspective'. 'Are most popular' is okay but 'very popular' is more natural. 'Everyone is using those' is incorrect: 'everyone' with 'is using' is odd and 'those' is unnecessary; use 'many people use them'. 'Any kind of other activities' is redundant; use 'other activities'. Ensure present simple for habitual actions: 'use'.

× Well yes, according to my perspective, bikes and motorcycles are most popular in my country as everyone is using those for their work or any kind of other activities.

✓ Well, yes. From my perspective, bikes and motorcycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for work and other activities.

The pronoun 'those' is misplaced when referring back to 'bikes and motorcycles'; use 'them'. Also 'their work' is fine but redundant with 'everyone'; 'many people use them' is clearer. Replace 'everyone' with 'many people' to avoid absolute claim and match plural pronoun 'them'.