Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, clarity and relevance. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No), use correct tense and pronouns, and avoid repetition. Add one or two concise supporting details with linking words (e.g., "however", "but") to explain why you didn't have a bike and mention alternatives you used. Keep to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. However, some of my friends had bikes, so I often borrowed theirs to ride around the neighborhood. As an alternative, I usually walked or used public transport to get to school.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Correct grammar (plural/singular, articles, verb forms) and avoid repetition. End with a short personal comment or example. Aim for 2–4 sentences total.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are more affordable and convenient than cars. For example, students and low-income workers often use bicycles to commute short distances. I also prefer to ride a bike when I go to nearby places because it is fast and cheap.

× And have have anybody when I was child because my family can't afford it, but some of my friends.

✓ I didn't have a bicycle when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one, but some of my friends did.

Errors: incorrect pronoun/word choice ('have have anybody' is ungrammatical), missing articles, wrong tense in dependent clause. Use past simple negative 'didn't have' for a past state, 'a bicycle' or 'one' as the correct noun/ pronoun, and 'couldn't' for past inability. Also add 'did' to avoid repetition and complete comparison with friends. Suggestion: practice forming past simple negatives and using 'one' to replace a previously mentioned count noun.

× Yes, I think bike is more popular in our country because as they are more convenient and much more much more much more affordable and affordable than car.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are more popular in our country because they are more convenient and much more affordable than cars.

Errors: singular/plural inconsistency and subject-verb agreement ('bike is' vs 'they are'), repetition ('much more much more much more'), missing articles/plural for 'car'. Use plural 'bikes' when referring to the category in general, match with plural pronoun 'they', and pluralize 'cars' for comparison. Remove redundant words. Suggestion: ensure nouns referring to general categories are plural and pronouns agree in number; avoid unnecessary repetition.

× Especially for student and low budget worker.

✓ Especially for students and low-budget workers.

Errors: missing plural forms and articles; 'student' and 'worker' should be plural to refer generally; 'low budget' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective 'low-budget'. Suggestion: use plural nouns when speaking generally and hyphenate compound adjectives before nouns.

× I prefer to ride his bike to one place.

✓ I prefer to ride my bike to places.

Errors: wrong possessive pronoun ('his' instead of 'my'), awkward expression 'to one place'. Use 'my' to refer to the speaker's bike and 'places' or 'a place' depending on meaning; here 'places' fits general preference. Suggestion: match possessive pronouns to the subject and use natural collocations like 'ride my bike to places' or 'ride my bike to a place.'