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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No I didn't. My parents had teach me several times but I couldn't learn to bike so they didn't buy me a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, especially in those metropolis. People use shared bikes in the central area of a city because it might be more convenient for them to then traveling by bus or subways.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 56.0

Gợi ý: 句子有语法错误和用词不当,需要更自然、简洁地表达。回答应以主题句开头,然后用一到两句具体细节支持。注意时态和被动/主动结构。例如“my parents tried to teach me”而不是“had teach me”。避免冗长重复,可补充简单原因或感受。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t. My parents tried to teach me several times when I was small, but I was too afraid to balance properly, so I never learned to ride and they never bought me one.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 表达总体正确但有语法和措辞问题。应先给直接肯定句,再用具体细节和连接词支持。注意冠词("metropolises"或"big cities")、动词形式("travel"而非"traveling"),以及搭配("convenient for commuting")。可提及原因、例子或对比以增强内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular, especially in big cities. Many people use shared bikes for short trips in the city center because they are a convenient and cheap way to reach bus or subway stations.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× My parents had teach me several times but I couldn't learn to bike so they didn't buy me a bike.

My parents had taught me several times, but I couldn't learn to ride a bike, so they didn't buy me one.

错误类型:过去式问题(ID 5)。说明:句中使用了过去完成时助动词“had”但之后动词使用了原形“teach”,正确形式应为过去分词“taught”。另外,短语“learn to bike”在英语中更常用“learn to ride a bike”,且重复使用“a bike”可用代词“one”替换以避免冗余。建议:将“had teach”改为“had taught”,把“learn to bike”改为“learn to ride a bike”,并将第二个“a bike”替为“one”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, especially in those metropolis.

Yes, especially in those metropolises.

错误类型:介词/名词使用问题(ID 11)。说明:原句中使用的可数名词“metropolis”应使用复数形式“metropolises”来对应指代“those”。同时“in those metropolises”是正确表达。建议:把“metropolis”改为复数形式“metropolises”。

Verb + -ing form

× People use shared bikes in the central area of a city because it might be more convenient for them to then traveling by bus or subways.

People use shared bikes in the central area of a city because it might be more convenient for them to travel by bus or subway afterwards.

错误类型:动词+ -ing 形式问题(ID 8)及介词/名词形式。说明:在结构“for them to + 动词原形”中,应使用动词原形“travel”,而不是现在分词“traveling”。此外,短语中“then traveling by bus or subways”不自然,建议使用“travel by bus or subway afterwards”。“subway”作为不可数或集合概念可用单数。建议:将“to then traveling”改为“to travel ... afterwards”,并把“subways”改为“subway”。

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