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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

I have a bike when I were a child it's was very fun to ride it with my friends.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Bikes are not popular in our country mainly because it's snow bikes lane and people prefer to go ride by car and by bus and if they try to ride a bike they do it on when it.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Используйте правильное время и согласование подлежащего и сказуемого. Начинайте с простого тематического предложения в прошедшем времени, затем добавьте одно или два конкретных подробных предложения. Избегайте грамматических ошибок (например, "I have" → "I had", "I were" → "I was", лишнее "it's was"). Можно добавить детали о возрасте, месте и воспоминаниях, используя связки (for example, when, because).

Ví dụ: I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bicycle with a bell, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood. For example, when I was eight I used to race my friends to the park, which was always great fun.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Постройте ответ логично: сначала краткий прямой ответ (Yes/No + причина), затем конкретная деталь или пример. Исправьте грамматику и лексику (например, "it's snow bikes lane" непонятно — скажите "we have long winters and few bike lanes"). Используйте связки (because, however, for example) и избегайте незавершённых фраз. Дайте одно завершённое пояснение о погоде, инфраструктуре или привычках людей.

Ví dụ: No, bikes are not very popular in my country because we have long, snowy winters and there are few safe bike lanes. As a result, most people prefer to travel by car or by bus, especially during the winter months. However, some people ride bikes for exercise in summer when the weather is better.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× I have a bike when I were a child it's was very fun to ride it with my friends.

I had a bike when I was a child. It was very fun to ride it with my friends.

Несоответствие времен и форма глагола: в первой части предложения нужно использовать прошедшее время для выражения действия в прошлом ('had' вместо 'have'). Во второй части субъект 'I' требует прошедшей формы глагола 'was' вместо 'were'. Также фразу лучше разделить на два предложения и согласовать вспомогательный глагол: 'It was very fun' или более естественно 'It was a lot of fun'. Совет: при описании прошлого используйте прошедшее простое (subject + past form).

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Bikes are not popular in our country mainly because it's snow bikes lane and people prefer to go ride by car and by bus and if they try to ride a bike they do it on when it.

Bikes are not popular in our country, mainly because there are no bike lanes when it snows, and people prefer to travel by car or by bus. If they try to ride a bike, they do it only sometimes.

Некорректное использование предлогов и устойчивых выражений: 'snow bikes lane' не имеет смысла; правильно 'bike lanes' и можно указать условие 'when it snows'. Фраза 'go ride by car and by bus' некорректна: употребляется 'travel by car' или 'go by bus'. Конструкция 'do it on when it' бессмысленна; заменено на 'only sometimes' для явного выражения редкости. Совет: используйте стандартные предлоги и устойчивые словосочетания ('bike lane', 'when it snows', 'travel by car').

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FunMerriment; Ridicule; Enjoyable; Playful; Tease
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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