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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't actually when I was a child. My house isn't far away from my school, so it is useless to buy a bicycle.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

No, because my hometown is a very little country so it is unnecessary to have a bike.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答较简短且有语法小错误,逻辑可以更清晰。建议用一句主题句直接回答,再用一到两句具体说明原因并用连接词衔接。注意时态和词汇搭配(例如说“it was unnecessary to buy”比“it is useless to buy”更自然)。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Since my house was very close to my school, walking was more convenient and it felt unnecessary to buy a bicycle. Also, my parents preferred to save money for other things like books.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答过于笼统且信息不准确(把“hometown”与“country”混淆),缺少细节和连接词。建议先给出直接观点,然后用具体原因、比较或例子支持,注意用词(small town / small city 而非 very little country)。

Ví dụ: Not really — bicycles aren’t very popular in my hometown. It's a small town where distances are short and most people prefer walking or taking short bus rides. For example, I usually see few bikes on the street because public transport is convenient.

Ngữ pháp

6: Present tense issue

× My house isn't far away from my school, so it is useless to buy a bicycle.

My house wasn't far away from my school, so it would have been useless to buy a bicycle.

原句在上下文中描述过去的情形(当我还是个孩子时),但使用了现在时(is/isn't, is)。时态不一致会导致时间逻辑混乱。应将描述过去情况的动词改为过去时;句末表达过去时的推断或结果,用“would have been”更准确地表示在过去的情形下购买自行车是不必要的。建议在叙述过去经历时,整句都保持过去时态。

6: Present tense issue

× No, because my hometown is a very little country so it is unnecessary to have a bike.

No, because my hometown was very small, so it was unnecessary to have a bike.

此处回答也在谈论过去的情况(与“当我还是个孩子时”相关),但用了现在时(is, is unnecessary)。应使用过去时(was, was unnecessary)以保持时态一致。另“a very little country”表达不自然,改为“very small”更符合英语习惯。建议在描述过去环境或习惯时统一使用过去时,并使用更自然的形容词搭配。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

LittleShort; Young; Brief; Minor
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