Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Correct tense and remove repetitions. For example, say you didn’t own a bike but borrowed one, explain how often and where, and mention with whom to make it specific.

Ví dụ: I didn’t own a bike as a child, but I often borrowed one from a neighbour. For example, at weekends I would ride with my family and friends around my neighbourhood, usually along the park paths near my house.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use clearer grammar and linking words. Start with a direct opinion, then give specific reasons and an example. Correct article use and word order (e.g., 'the New Territories'). Keep it to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in Hong Kong. In the New Territories many people use bikes for short trips because they are faster than walking and cheaper than public transport, especially on leisure paths and in small residential areas.

× Well in my childhood I didn't have a bike at my home, but I borrowed a bike at the bus at the bus stop and I can bike during in the weekend with my family and friends near my my house.

✓ Well, in my childhood I didn't have a bike at home, but I borrowed one at the bus stop and I could ride it on weekends with my family and friends near my house.

Errors: repetition ('at the bus at the bus stop', 'my my house'), awkward phrasing ('at my home', 'borrowed a bike at the bus stop', 'can bike during in the weekend') and tense/modal mismatch. According to the context (past habit), use past tense/modal 'could' rather than 'can'. Use 'one' to avoid repetition and 'ride' instead of 'bike' as a verb is acceptable but 'ride it' is clearer. Remove redundant articles: 'at home' not 'at my home'. Use 'on weekends' for regular weekend activities. Suggestions: avoid repeating words, match tense to time frame (past), use concise phrasing and correct prepositions ('at the bus stop' -> 'at the bus stop' fixed to single occurrence).

× In my point of view, I think bicycle is very common in our country, which is Hong Kong, because in Hong Kong, where we live in the new territory, is very useful to take the bike instead of walking or taking the transportation.

✓ In my point of view, I think bicycles are very common in our country, Hong Kong, because where we live in the New Territories it is very useful to take a bike instead of walking or taking public transport.

Errors: noun number and article ('bicycle' should be plural 'bicycles' to match 'are'), missing subject ('where we live in the new territory, is very useful' lacks a subject for 'is'), incorrect place name form ('New Territories' is the correct term), awkward article use ('take the bike' -> 'take a bike') and collocation ('taking public transport' is more natural than 'taking the transportation'). Suggestions: use plural for general statements, ensure every clause has a subject and verb, capitalize proper nouns, and use natural prepositions and collocations ('in my point of view' is acceptable but 'in my view' is more natural).