Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response slightly more natural and informative by adding a brief specific detail and using a linking word. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences). For example, mention the type of bike, who you rode with, or a short memory to make the answer more engaging.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a small red bicycle when I was a child. I often rode it around our apartment complex with my younger brother, and we would race each other on weekends.

Gợi ý: Remove fillers like “Umm,” use linking words for coherence, and be more specific about when and why popularity has changed. Mention a time frame, concrete improvements, and the climate's effect briefly. Keep to a maximum of 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think cycling has become more popular in the last five years because many cities have built dedicated bike lanes and improved parking for bicycles. However, in the past it was less common due to the hot climate and lack of safe cycling routes.

× I think there is an increase in popularity.

✓ I think there has been an increase in popularity.

The student is commenting on a trend that started in the past and continues to the present; using present simple 'is' with 'an increase' sounds unnatural. Use present perfect 'has been' to indicate a change over time that affects the present. Suggestion: use 'has been an increase' or rephrase 'bikes have become more popular.'

× Umm there is a lot of dedicated cycling areas, better infrastructure for cycling.

✓ Umm, there are a lot of dedicated cycling areas and better infrastructure for cycling.

Plural noun 'areas' requires plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement). The original also uses a comma splice to list two items; connect them with 'and'. Also include a small pause comma after 'Umm'. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with plural subjects and join items with conjunctions.

× In the past it wasn't very common, taken into consideration the climate.

✓ In the past it wasn't very common, taking the climate into consideration.

The original uses a passive participle 'taken' incorrectly, creating an awkward reduced clause. Use the present participle 'taking' to form a participle phrase that modifies the main clause. Also this keeps the past context consistent. Suggestion: use 'taking into consideration' or rephrase to 'considering the climate.'