Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify and organize your response, use correct tense and simpler vocabulary, avoid irrelevant phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details with linking words. Correct common grammar errors: use past tense for childhood, say “I didn’t have a bike” and “my parents didn’t allow me to ride.” Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents didn’t allow me to ride because I didn’t know how to cycle and they thought it was unsafe. Now I own two bikes: a Royal Enfield and a KTM sports bike.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more precise and accurate, avoid hesitation, and use linking words to structure reasons. Provide correct names or say you are unsure rather than giving unclear brand names. Use concise phrases: “They are popular because...; for example...” and give one concrete example of cost or convenience.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheaper to buy and run than cars and they are easier to park in busy cities. For example, many commuters use motorbikes to save time and fuel costs, and common brands include Bajaj and Hero.

× No, I don't have any biker when I have fatal.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The student uses incorrect tense and pronouns. 'Don't have' is present tense but the question is about the past; use past tense 'didn't have'. 'Biker' is wrong word; use 'bike'. 'When I have fatal' is ungrammatical and likely meant 'when I was a child' or 'when I was young'. Suggestion: use clear past-tense structure and correct noun: 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Why? Because in my childhood I don't uh, I don't know how to drive, how to ride a bike.

✓ Because in my childhood I didn't know how to drive or ride a bike.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't know' with a past-time reference 'in my childhood'. Use past tense 'didn't know'. Also use 'or' rather than repeating 'how to' for concision. Suggestion: always match verb tense to the time frame mentioned.

× So my parents are not allowed to ride a bike at that age.

✓ So my parents did not allow me to ride a bike at that age.

The original uses passive and wrong subject: 'my parents are not allowed to ride' implies parents couldn't ride, but intended meaning is parents did not allow the student. Use active past: 'my parents did not allow me to ride a bike at that age.' This matches past context.

× But I am in now.

✓ But I have one now.

'But I am in now' is ungrammatical. The student likely means they own a bike now. Use 'I have one now' or 'I own two bikes now' to express possession in present.

× I hold 2 bikes when is on Royal Enfield and the one is KTM sports bike.

✓ I own two bikes: one is a Royal Enfield and the other is a KTM sports bike.

Use 'own' or 'have' rather than 'hold'. Number should be written as words in speech but numbers are acceptable. Correct article use: 'a Royal Enfield' and 'a KTM sports bike'. Also 'the one' should be 'the other' to contrast two items. Suggestion: 'I own two bikes: one is a Royal Enfield and the other is a KTM sports bike.'

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

This sentence is grammatically correct; it uses present simple correctly to state a general fact. No change needed.

× Why? Because most of the people use uh, bikes uh, for travel one place to another place.

✓ Because most people use bikes to travel from one place to another.

'Most of the people' is wordy; 'most people' is natural. Use 'to travel from one place to another' for standard phrasing. Remove filler words. Suggestion: 'Because most people use bikes to travel from one place to another.'

× And it also saves money by giving them more mileage.

✓ It also saves money because bikes give better mileage.

'Giving them more mileage' is awkward. Use 'bikes give better mileage' or 'because they are more fuel-efficient' to clearly express the idea. Suggestion: 'Bikes save money because they give better mileage.'

× And the purple bikes in my countries are Erronda and most of the country uh popular companies are Erwanda and uh, Bajaj.

✓ The popular bike brands in my country are Honda and Bajaj.

This sentence has many errors: 'purple bikes' is wrong word choice; likely 'popular brands'. 'countries' should be 'country'. 'Erronda' and 'Erwanda' appear to be misspellings of brand names; 'Honda' is likely intended. Simplify: 'The popular bike brands in my country are Honda and Bajaj.' Suggestion: check brand spellings and use 'brands' not 'purple'.

× Why? Because uh, they made very few licenses bikes and gives.

✓ They are popular because they make affordable, fuel-efficient bikes.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Made very few licenses bikes and gives' makes no sense. Likely intended meaning: the companies make low-cost or fuel-efficient bikes. Use clear adjectives: 'affordable' and 'fuel-efficient'. Suggestion: 'They are popular because they make affordable, fuel-efficient bikes.'