Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify the main idea and use correct tense and concise sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. yes/no and a brief detail), then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (past tense) and avoid repetition. Use linking words if adding details: for example, “and”, “also”, or “in fact.”

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a small, yellow, two-wheeled bike that I used to ride around my neighborhood. I enjoyed riding it with my friends on weekends.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons and a brief comparison. Use correct tense and smoother linking words like “however”, “but”, “nowadays” or “because.” Avoid filler words such as “sorry.” Keep it to two or three sentences max.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think bikes are very popular nowadays. When I was a child, many people used bicycles for short journeys; however, now most people prefer public transport like buses and the subway because it is faster and more convenient.

× Yes, I I have I have a car where I'm able to cheer out. There is a bicycle and two two wheels and it it's yellow color.

✓ Yes. I had a bicycle when I was a child. It had two wheels and was yellow.

The student is answering a past-tense question about childhood, so verbs should be in the past tense (Grammar Problem Type 5 and 6). Repeating words like 'I I' and 'two two' are filler or errors and should be removed (Grammar Problem Type 26). 'I have a car where I'm able to cheer out' is irrelevant and ungrammatical; the intended meaning is about possessing a bicycle in the past, so use 'I had a bicycle.' 'There is a bicycle and two wheels and it it's yellow color' contains several issues: 'There is' should be past 'It had' or simply state 'It had two wheels' (Grammar Problem Type 3 and 5), 'two wheels' is inherent in 'bicycle' so keep concise, and 'it's yellow color' should be 'was yellow' not 'yellow color' (Grammar Problem Type 13 and 26). Suggestion: keep tense consistent with the question, remove repetitions, and use simple past forms: 'I had a bicycle when I was a child. It had two wheels and was yellow.'

× No, it's not very popular.

✓ No, bicycles are not very popular.

The question asks generally about bikes in the country, so use a plural subject 'bicycles' and present simple 'are' (Grammar Problem Type 6 and 27). 'It's not very popular' incorrectly uses singular 'it' and 'is' which is appropriate only for a singular noun. Improve by saying 'Bicycles are not very popular' to match the general topic and correct subject-verb agreement.

× When I was child the bicycle is very popular, but now everyone will take the transport, public transport, transport like subway, bus and. Sorry.

✓ When I was a child, bicycles were very popular, but now everyone uses public transportation such as the subway and buses.

The speaker refers to the past, so 'When I was child' needs an article and 'child' should be 'a child' (Grammar Problem Type 22). 'the bicycle is very popular' mixes present tense with a past-time reference and uses singular; change to plural past: 'bicycles were very popular' (Grammar Problem Type 5 and 27). 'everyone will take the transport' is incorrect modal/tense and word choice; use present simple 'everyone uses public transportation' to describe a current habit (Grammar Problem Type 7 and 6). List items should be plural ('buses') and 'subway' can be preceded by 'the' depending on dialect; 'public transportation such as the subway and buses' is clear. Also remove trailing 'and. Sorry.' Suggestion: keep tenses consistent (past for past events, present simple for current habits), use correct articles, and use plural nouns for general statements.