Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap daha açık ve düzenli olmalı; ana fikri net bir cümlede vermeli, sonra kısa ve ilgili detaylarla desteklemelidir. Dilbilgisi ve sözdizimi hataları (örneğin "I have a throne more about it", "a bicycle come out", "I don't see it it") düzeltilmeli. Bağlaçlar (when, and, then) mantıklı sırada ve doğru biçimde kullanılmalı. Ayrıca cümle sayısı 5'i geçmemeli; gereksiz tekrarlar çıkarılmalı.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I remember being about five and riding to my friend's house along our street. One day my bike fell and I couldn't find it for a while, which made me very upset. Since then I've been more careful about keeping my belongings safe.

Gợi ý: Cevap net bir görüş ile başlamalı ve ardından spesifik nedenler veya örnekler sunulmalıdır. Kelime seçimi ve dilbilgisi (ör. "so boring, seaside fishing" anlamsal olarak karışık; "I've always sees" yanlış çekim) düzeltilmeli. Bağlaçlarla nedenleri mantıklı sıraya koyun (for example, because, therefore). Gereksiz tekrarlar çıkarılmalı.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, in coastal towns many people use bicycles to get to the beach or run errands because the roads are flat and traffic is light. As a result you often see families and tourists riding bikes along the promenade.

× Yeah, I had a bike when I was a child and I have a throne more about it actually when I was like 5 or something.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike when I was a child and I have a vague memory about it actually from when I was like five or so.

The sentence mixes past and present incorrectly ('had' vs 'have a throne more' which is ungrammatical). Use past-referencing expressions when talking about childhood memories. Replace 'have a throne more' with 'have a vague memory' and use 'from when I was five' to match past context. Use words in correct forms and numbers spelled out in formal speech.

× I'm going like to my friend.

✓ I was going to my friend's house.

The original mixes present progressive and filler 'like', and lacks possessive for 'friend'. The context is past, so use past continuous 'was going'. Add possessive 'friend's' and specify 'house' if needed. Remove filler 'like' for clarity.

× Yeah. And then a bicycle come out.

✓ And then a bicycle came out.

The verb 'come' should agree with past tense context; use past form 'came'. This corrects subject-verb agreement for tense.

× I don't see it it.

✓ I didn't see it.

The speaker intends to describe a past event, so use past negation 'didn't see'. Also remove the duplicated 'it'.

× Umm, yeah, I think because our hometown is so boring, seaside fishing, you know, we're always going to beach and always someone is riding a bike in the seaside.

✓ Umm, yeah, I think because our hometown is so boring and centered on seaside fishing, we always go to the beach and there is always someone riding a bike by the seaside.

Multiple tense and structure issues: 'we're always going to beach' should be simple present 'we always go to the beach' for habitual actions. Use 'there is always someone' to introduce existence correctly. Add prepositions 'to the beach' and 'by the seaside'. Also restructure to make meaning clear ('seaside fishing' as an activity).

× I've always sees like this persons in this country.

✓ I've always seen people like this in our country.

'Sees' conflicts with auxiliary 'I've' (I have), which requires past participle 'seen'. 'This persons' is plural mismatch and incorrect demonstrative; use 'people' or 'persons' with 'these' if needed. Replace 'in this country' with 'in our country' for coherence.