Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think so, especially among the children cause it's indispensable for children's playing and exercising.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 你的回答没有直接回答问题,应该先给出肯定或否定的主题句,然后再补充具体细节(如什么时候、什么样的自行车、谁送的或你如何使用它)。尽量用1-3个过渡词连接细节,使回答清晰自然。避免重复考官的问题。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, which my parents bought for me. I used it to ride to my friend's house and practice tricks in the park, so it became my favourite toy.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答基本直接但结构和用词可以更自然具体。建议先给主题句,然后用连接词展开原因并提供具体例子或比较,避免口语缩写(cause)。扩展到两到三句,每句控制长度,保持连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many children use bikes for playing and exercise, and parents often encourage cycling as a healthy activity. In some cities, bikes are also a convenient way for short trips, so you can see them everywhere.
× Yes, I think so, especially among the children cause it's indispensable for children's playing and exercising.
✓ Yes, I think so, especially among children, because it's indispensable for children's play and exercise.
问题类型:12(代词/指示词使用不当)和13(形容词/副词使用不当)与11(介词使用)相关。原句中“among the children”在泛指时不需定冠词“the”,应为“among children”。口语缩写“cause”应写成正式连接词“because”。短语“children's playing and exercising”在表达习惯上不自然,名词化形式更常见且简洁,应改为“children's play and exercise”。另外可去掉重复的“children's”若前文已明确。改正后更符合英语习惯与语法。