Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood and include a brief reason or memory to enrich the answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was six, and my father taught me how to ride it in our backyard. I remember falling a few times, but after a week I could ride without help, which made me very proud.

Gợi ý: Respond with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons or examples. Use correct tense and improve coherence by using linking words (for example, 'because' or 'for instance'). Avoid vague phrases and minor grammar errors.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many children and adults use them for short trips and exercise. For instance, in my neighborhood I see dozens of children riding after school, and many families cycle to the local market on weekends.

× Yes I do have a bike when I was a child at the time I was just six and my father first first taught me how to ride a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I was just six when my father first taught me how to ride it.

The sentence mixes present tense ('do have') with past-time phrases ('when I was a child', 'I was just six', 'taught'), causing a tense inconsistency. Use the past simple ('had', 'was', 'taught') for events that happened in the past. Also split the long sentence into two for clarity and replace the repeated word 'first' and redundant phrase 'at the time'. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for past events and keep sentences concise.

× Umm I think everyone need to comment their skills so when I when.

✓ Umm, I think everyone needs to develop their skills.

The subject 'everyone' is singular and requires the third person singular verb form 'needs', not 'need'. The original sentence is also unfinished and contains an unclear phrase 'comment their skills'. Replacing with 'develop their skills' conveys a likely intended meaning and completes the thought. Suggestion: Match singular indefinite pronouns (everyone, someone) with singular verb forms and ensure sentences are complete.

× Yes, of course in my country every child would have a bike and in the committee that I have grew up I can saw many children playing or riding their bikes every day.

✓ Yes, of course in my country almost every child has a bike, and in the community where I grew up I saw many children playing or riding their bikes every day.

Multiple issues: 'would have' is inappropriate for a general present fact — use simple present 'has'. 'Committee' is the wrong word; 'community' fits the context. 'That I have grew up' combines present perfect and past simple incorrectly; use 'where I grew up'. 'I can saw' mixes modal/present and past forms; use past simple 'saw' for past observations. Also change 'every child' to 'almost every child' if exaggeration avoided, but simple present plural agreement is main fix. Suggestion: Use simple present for general truths, correct vocabulary ('community'), and use consistent past simple for past observations.

× That's funny.

✓ That's nice.

'That's funny' implies something is humorous, which may not be the intended response to children riding bikes; 'That's nice' or 'That's great' better expresses appreciation. This is a word choice (adjective) suggestion rather than strict grammar, aimed at pragmatic appropriateness. Suggestion: Choose adjectives that match the intended reaction.