Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and clarity: answer directly in past tense, give a short topic sentence and one supporting detail. Avoid irrelevant phrasing like "in charge." Keep it natural and concise (1–2 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bicycle when I was a child. I used to ride it to visit friends and explore my neighborhood every weekend.

Gợi ý: Organize and correct grammar and meaning: start with a clear opinion, then give two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because / therefore). Avoid contradictory or unclear words like "harmful" unless you explain. Use correct subject–verb agreement and concise phrasing.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people ride bikes to work or the market, and cycling is also promoted as a healthy and eco-friendly way to travel.

× Yes, I have a bike when I am in charge.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use the past tense. 'Have' and 'am' are present tense; they must be changed to 'had' and 'was' to match the past time reference. Also 'in charge' is incorrect contextually and likely a wrong phrase choice; replace with 'a child' to repeat the time expression. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past situations: 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Yes, the bike are very popular in our country, we can go anywhere and our bikes to complete our work with the bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country; we can go anywhere and use bikes to do our work.

Subject-verb agreement and noun number problems: 'the bike are' mixes singular article with plural verb; remove 'the' and use plural 'bikes are'. The phrase 'our bikes to complete our work with the bike' is ungrammatical and repetitive. Use 'use bikes to do our work' to convey the idea. Also change comma splice into proper punctuation. Suggestion: make subject and verb agree and avoid repetition: 'Bikes are very popular ... we can use bikes to do our work.'

× It's a very uh, harmful for ourself and some uh, easy transportations for ourself to use it.

✓ They can be harmful to ourselves sometimes, but they are also an easy means of transportation to use.

Multiple issues: 'It's a very harmful' is wrong because 'harmful' describes something and needs a noun (or use 'they can be harmful'). 'Ourself' is incorrect reflexive pronoun; use 'ourselves'. 'Transportations' is an incorrect plural; use 'means of transportation' or 'transport'. Also pronoun-number mismatch: preceding sentences refer to 'bikes' (plural), so use plural 'they'. Suggestion: match number, use correct reflexive pronoun 'ourselves', and use proper noun phrase 'means of transportation' rather than 'transportations'.