Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, I haven't bike in my childhood.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I think bike is the popular in the my country, in my country because most of the young people, young people like by motorbikes.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Correct the grammar and make the response natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then optionally add one brief reason or detail. Use past simple for past situations: “I didn’t have a bike.” If you add a reason, connect it with a linking word such as “because” or “so.” Keep it to no more than 2–3 sentences.
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I usually walked to school because my family couldn’t afford one, so I used public transport or walked.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Use plural nouns and correct word order; give a clear opinion followed by a specific reason. Start with a topic sentence: “Yes, bikes are popular.” Then add one or two supporting details using linking words like “because” or “for example.” Use vocabulary distinguishing types of bikes (bicycles vs motorbikes) if relevant.
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many young people prefer motorbikes for their convenience and low fuel costs. For example, students often use scooters to get to university quickly through busy traffic.
× No, I haven't bike in my childhood.
✓ No, I didn't have a bike in my childhood.
The student used the present perfect negative form 'haven't' with a countable noun without an article and with a past time reference 'in my childhood'. Use past simple for completed past situations: 'didn't have'. Also countable singular noun 'bike' requires an article 'a'. Suggestion: Use past simple 'didn't have' and include the article: 'I didn't have a bike.'
× I think bike is the popular in the my country, in my country because most of the young people, young people like by motorbikes.
✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because most young people like motorcycles.
Multiple errors: singular/plural and article use. 'Bike' should be plural 'bikes' to refer generally; verb must agree: 'are'. Remove unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'my country'. 'Young people, young people' is repetition—use 'young people' once. 'Like by motorbikes' is incorrect word order and preposition: use 'like motorcycles' (direct object) or 'go by motorbikes' for the mode of transport. Suggestion: Say 'I think bikes are popular in my country because most young people like motorcycles.'
× I think bike is the popular in the my country, in my country because most of the young people, young people like by motorbikes.
✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because most young people like motorcycles.
The phrase 'the my country' incorrectly combines the definite article 'the' with the possessive 'my'. Possessive determiners do not take 'the'. Remove 'the' before 'my country'. Also 'the popular' is incorrect; use 'popular' without 'the' when describing a general quality. Suggestion: Use 'in my country' and 'are popular' to express generalization.