Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: You answered directly and gave relevant details, but there are issues with fluency (hesitations, repetition), minor grammar errors, and some redundancy. Improve by removing fillers, correcting verb forms and possessives, and tightening sentences. Use one clear topic sentence, then one or two supporting details with linking words. Practice smoother pronunciation and plural/singular forms.

Ví dụ: I didn’t have my own bike as a child. Instead, I borrowed a classmate’s bike to learn how to ride, and I practiced inside the school campus because my father was strict and didn’t allow me to ride on the road.

Gợi ý: Good content and relevant examples; however some wording is awkward and slightly informal. Improve coherence by using clearer linking phrases and more precise vocabulary. Avoid filler phrases like "by the way" and vague words such as "and all." Limit to 3–4 sentences: state your opinion, give specific reasons or examples, and finish with a brief comment. Also watch article and plural usage.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in the Philippines. Many people of all ages ride bicycles, especially on weekends, because cycling is affordable and good exercise. It is nice to see children and older adults staying active by riding bikes.

× To be honest, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ To be honest, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

No correction needed; sentence correctly uses the past tense negative 'didn't have' to describe a past state.

× I remember borrowing my classmates bike just so that I can learn myself.

✓ I remember borrowing my classmate's bike just so that I could teach myself.

The original lacks the possessive apostrophe and uses 'classmates' (plural) incorrectly; use singular possessive 'classmate's' if referring to one person. Also, modal and tense: 'can learn myself' is incorrect English; use 'could teach myself' or 'could learn on my own' to match past context. Suggestion: use possessive apostrophe and match past tense/modal verbs.

× I used to umm umm borrow her her bike and ride it inside our school campus because I was not really allowed to ride the bike.

✓ I used to borrow her bike and ride it inside our school campus because I was not really allowed to ride a bike.

The phrase repeats 'her' twice; remove duplication. Also 'the bike' implies a specific bike; 'a bike' is more natural when speaking generally. Keep past habitual 'used to' and past passive 'was not allowed'—these are correct.

× My father is very strict.

✓ My father is very strict.

No correction needed; present simple is appropriate to describe a general characteristic.

× I do believe that bikes are popular here for where I'm from.

✓ I do believe that bikes are popular where I'm from.

The phrase 'here for where I'm from' is redundant and awkward. Remove 'here' or 'for' to create the correct expression 'where I'm from.' Present simple 'are' correctly describes a general truth.

× I'm from the Philippines and you will see a lot of people riding their bikes especially on weekends from all ages.

✓ I'm from the Philippines, and you will see a lot of people of all ages riding their bikes, especially on weekends.

Word order is awkward: 'from all ages' is incorrect. Use the phrase 'people of all ages.' Add commas to separate clauses and reorder to place 'especially on weekends' at the end for clarity.

× By the way, it's fun to see kids and even the old people riding their bikes though they're still being active and all.

✓ By the way, it's fun to see kids and even older people riding their bikes; they're still active and all.

'The old people' is awkward; use 'older people.' 'Still being active' is unidiomatic—use 'still active.' Use a semicolon or separate clause to connect ideas. 'And all' is colloquial; acceptable in speech but can be kept or removed depending on formality.