Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and shows a clear idea (parents as role models). To improve, make your response more concise and correct minor grammar issues. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy like “as a child” repeated and fix tense/word choice (e.g., “I was influenced” or “I learned from”).

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. For example, they always greeted neighbours and thanked shopkeepers, so I copied those habits. As a result, politeness became a normal part of my behaviour.

Gợi ý: Good clear opinion and reason. To improve, make the structure tighter: one clear topic sentence, then a linked supporting detail, and finish with a brief consequence. Use more precise vocabulary (e.g., “seek help” instead of “access assistance”) and correct small word order issues.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe politeness is very important. It helps build trust and makes people more willing to help you, for example when you ask a stranger for directions. Consequently, polite behaviour often leads to better social outcomes.

Gợi ý: The idea is understandable but the answer is wordy and has grammatical errors (e.g., “should definitely don't show” is incorrect). Improve by giving a clear topic sentence, then one or two concise examples using linking words. Clarify the nuance about limits to politeness with correct phrasing and a brief reason.

Ví dụ: Generally we should be polite to everyone, especially in public and at work. However, if someone is verbally abusive, you can set boundaries and stop being friendly in order to protect yourself.

Gợi ý: Content is relevant but phrasing and grammar need correction and conciseness. Start with a direct topic sentence, then provide one or two specific actions as examples. Fix tense and redundancy (remove duplicate “made”, use “received help”, “apologised for mistakes”).

Ví dụ: As a child I often said “thank you” when adults helped me and apologised when I made mistakes. For example, if I accidentally bumped into someone I would say sorry immediately.

× Well, actually I think I am influenced by my parents, because as a child you always imitate the people around you, so as I grow up, I've found out that my parents always show good manners when they are strangers.

✓ Well, actually I think I was influenced by my parents, because as a child you always imitate the people around you, so as I grew up, I found that my parents always showed good manners even around strangers.

Multiple tense and agreement issues: 'I am influenced' should be past 'I was influenced' because referring to childhood (Grammar Problem Type ID 6: Present tense issue and 5: Past tense issue). 'As I grow up' should be past 'as I grew up' (5: Past tense issue). 'I've found out' is awkward with past narrative; use simple past 'I found' (5). 'when they are strangers' is incorrect: parents are not strangers; intended meaning is 'even around strangers' (11: Incorrect use of prepositions/26: Sentence structure errors). Suggested improvement: keep past tense consistently when describing past experiences, and use 'around strangers' to express being polite in others' presence.

× Definitely and being polite actually benefits people in the long term, especially when you want to access assistance from a stranger because this shows that you treat others with respect.

✓ Definitely, being polite actually benefits people in the long term, especially when you want to obtain assistance from a stranger because it shows that you treat others with respect.

Third person singular and sentence structure issues: 'being polite actually benefits people' is correct for third person singular (2: Third person singular issue) but the original sentence had awkward conjunction 'Definitely and' and 'access assistance' is incorrect collocation (11: Incorrect use of prepositions). Also 'this shows' is unclear; use 'it shows'. Suggestions: remove 'and' after 'Definitely', use 'obtain assistance' or 'ask for assistance', and use 'it shows' for clarity.

× I think we should always show our kindness to everyone around us, but there should be a limitation, especially when you meet a person who verbally assaults you, then at that moment you should definitely don't show your kindness.

✓ I think we should always show kindness to everyone around us, but there should be limits; especially when you meet a person who verbally assaults you, at that moment you should definitely not show kindness.

Incorrect use of prepositions and negation: 'show our kindness' is acceptable but 'show kindness' is more natural (11). 'There should be a limitation' is awkward; use 'limits'. 'Then at that moment you should definitely don't show' contains incorrect word order and negation: use 'you should definitely not show' (2: Third person singular issue and 26: Sentence structure errors). Suggestions: simplify phrasing, use 'not' after modal 'should' and avoid 'then' plus 'at that moment' redundancy.

× I said thank you whenever I received a help from an adult or I apologize to the behavior that I made made a mistake. That's how I show my politeness as a child.

✓ I said thank you whenever I received help from an adult or I apologised for a mistake I made. That's how I showed politeness as a child.

Quantifier and verb tense issues: 'a help' is incorrect; 'help' is uncountable so drop the article (14). 'I apologize to the behavior that I made made a mistake' is ungrammatical and repeats 'made'; correct form is 'I apologised for a mistake I made' (5: Past tense issue, 26: Sentence structure errors). Also keep past tense consistently: 'said'/'received'/'apologised'/'showed' to describe childhood (5). Suggestions: use 'help' without 'a', use 'apologise for' plus 'a mistake I made', and maintain past tense for past actions.