Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
I like to wear casual clothes because it's simple and practical, so I it's comfortable for me to wear T-shirts and jeans wherever I go. So yeah.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
Definitely, yes. So I want to feel more comfortable every day, so I want to wear casual clothes and it's very easy for me to prepare because I just wear T-shirts and jeans wherever I go. It's also practical when doing daily routines.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Definitely yes. I like wearing T-shirts because I can partner it with different. Lower clothes I think with slack shorts or even skirts. So it's very suitable in every.
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes, so I usually grabs anything clean and convenient, such as AT shirt and a jeans. Whatever, I'm going out.
Giám khảo
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Thí sinh
No I'm not wearing different kinds of clothes on weekdays and weekends so I just wear same styles. So my company has strict dress code so I stick to it during weekdays and during weekends I just have a casual clothes which is AT shirt and a jeans.
Giám khảo
What colour clothes do you like?
Thí sinh
I used to wear black because I can partner it with different types of clothes so it it's also simple but elegant so they say. Black looks good in everything so it's also perfect for formal gathering or kind.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler phrases like "so yeah", and correct small errors (e.g. "I it's" → "they are" or "I find them"). Add one specific detail about when or why you choose that style to make the answer more informative.
Ví dụ: I prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable and practical. For example, I often wear T-shirts and jeans when I run errands or meet friends because they are easy to move in and require little planning.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: Open with a direct topic sentence answering the choice, then give one or two concise reasons with linking words (because, so, therefore). Avoid repetition of the same idea. Be precise about situations that make casual clothes practical.
Ví dụ: I definitely prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I feel more relaxed and it saves time in the morning. For instance, wearing a basic T-shirt and jeans makes my daily commute and chores easier.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Fix grammar and sentence structure: give one clear reason and illustrate with a specific example. Use linking words like "for example" and avoid fragmented sentences. Clarify phrases like "partner it with different lower clothes."
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts because they are versatile. For example, I often pair a T-shirt with shorts in summer or with a skirt for a casual outing, which makes them suitable for many occasions.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Use correct verb forms and more natural phrasing. Start with a direct answer, then give a concise reason and a clear example. Replace awkward phrases like "AT shirt" with "a T-shirt" and avoid fragments like "Whatever, I'm going out."
Ví dụ: No, I usually don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer convenience. I typically grab a clean T-shirt and jeans when I'm going out since that combination is quick and reliable.
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Answer directly and organize information: state the overall answer, then explain the reason and contrast weekdays vs weekends with linking words (however, while). Correct grammar and phrasing ("a casual outfit" instead of "a casual clothes").
Ví dụ: No, I mostly wear the same style on weekdays and weekends. My workplace has a strict dress code on weekdays, but on weekends I switch to casual outfits like a T-shirt and jeans.
What colour clothes do you like?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: Give a clear present-tense preference (e.g., "I like black") and explain with a specific reason. Avoid vague phrases like "so they say" and incomplete endings like "or kind." Use linking words (because, therefore) and provide one short example of an occasion.
Ví dụ: I prefer black clothing because it pairs well with many items and looks elegant. For example, a black dress or blazer is suitable for both casual outings and formal gatherings.
× I like to wear casual clothes because it's simple and practical, so I it's comfortable for me to wear T-shirts and jeans wherever I go.
✓ I like to wear casual clothes because they are simple and practical, so it's comfortable for me to wear T-shirts and jeans wherever I go.
Pronoun and verb agreement: 'casual clothes' is plural, so use 'they are' not 'it's'. Remove the extra 'I' before 'it's'. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs and avoid redundant words.
× Definitely, yes. So I want to feel more comfortable every day, so I want to wear casual clothes and it's very easy for me to prepare because I just wear T-shirts and jeans wherever I go.
✓ Definitely. I want to feel comfortable every day, so I wear casual clothes; it's very easy for me to get ready because I just wear T-shirts and jeans wherever I go.
Tense and redundancy: use simple present 'I wear' for habitual actions rather than 'I want to wear' repeated. Use 'get ready' instead of 'prepare' for natural phrasing. Remove extra filler 'so'.
× Definitely yes. I like wearing T-shirts because I can partner it with different. Lower clothes I think with slack shorts or even skirts. So it's very suitable in every.
✓ Definitely. I like wearing T-shirts because I can pair them with different bottoms, such as slacks, shorts, or even skirts. They are suitable for many occasions.
Incorrect word choice and agreement: 'partner it with' is wrong; use 'pair them with' and match plural 'T-shirts' with 'them'. 'Lower clothes' should be 'bottoms'; 'slack shorts' unclear—use 'slacks' or 'shorts'. 'So it's very suitable in every' is incomplete—specify 'many occasions'.
× No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes, so I usually grabs anything clean and convenient, such as AT shirt and a jeans.
✓ No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes, so I usually grab anything clean and convenient, such as a T-shirt and jeans.
Subject-verb agreement: after 'I usually' use base verb 'grab' not 'grabs'. Article and noun forms: use 'a T-shirt' (not AT shirt) and 'jeans' without 'a'.
× Whatever, I'm going out.
✓ I wear whatever when I'm going out.
Fragment: 'Whatever, I'm going out' is ungrammatical. Clarify intent: 'I wear whatever when I'm going out' or 'When I'm going out, I wear whatever is available.' Ensure a subject and verb for a complete sentence.
× No I'm not wearing different kinds of clothes on weekdays and weekends so I just wear same styles.
✓ No, I don't wear different kinds of clothes on weekdays and weekends, so I wear the same styles.
Tense/form: use simple present 'I don't wear' for habitual actions. Include article 'the' before 'same styles'.
× So my company has strict dress code so I stick to it during weekdays and during weekends I just have a casual clothes which is AT shirt and a jeans.
✓ My company has a strict dress code, so I stick to it during weekdays. On weekends I just wear casual clothes, such as a T-shirt and jeans.
Articles and countability: 'a strict dress code' needs an article. 'a casual clothes' is wrong—'casual clothes' (plural) or 'a casual outfit'. Use 'wear' for clothing. Replace 'AT shirt' with 'a T-shirt'.
× I used to wear black because I can partner it with different types of clothes so it it's also simple but elegant so they say.
✓ I usually wear black because I can pair it with different types of clothes, so it's simple but elegant, as people say.
Tense: 'I used to wear' implies past habit; context suggests current preference, so use 'I usually wear' or 'I wear'. Use 'pair it with' and correct repetition 'it it's'. 'as people say' is a natural replacement for 'so they say'.
× Black looks good in everything so it's also perfect for formal gathering or kind.
✓ Black looks good with everything, so it's also perfect for formal gatherings and similar events.
Preposition and noun forms: use 'with' rather than 'in' for clothing combinations. Use plural 'gatherings' and clarify 'kind' to 'similar events'. Ensure quantifier and noun agreement.