Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
OK usually I wear comfortable clothes which suits me and also provide me comfort. Umm specifically I prefer wearing baggy jeans with crop tops or T-shirts which gives me a vibe and also they are.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
Actually depends upon the situation. I would prefer uh, smart clothes on occasions like weddings or any formal meeting and etcetera. And uh, casual clothes is my thing. So I prefer it all the time. I uh, went for shopping or go out with my.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Yes, I love wearing T-shirts. It's in my daily routine that I wear wear T-shirts mostly I prefer wearing baggy T-shirts which gives me a vibe and suits my aura. Umm mostly I prefer wearing black or white T-shirts because.
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
No, I don't actually. I don't think much before going out like what I want to wear or how to I dress myself. I just pick up a dress according to the occasion and just wear it and style it. I think it depends on the person itself that how he looks or.
Giám khảo
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Thí sinh
Actually no as I prefer wearing casual clothes and comfortable clothes so I just pick any T-shirt or a jeans to go out and if I stay at my place I just wear night suit or cod sets.
Giám khảo
What colour clothes do you like?
Thí sinh
Usually I wear black because it's my favorite colour since childhood, but at time as time passed I tried to discover some new colours. So now sometimes I prefer wearing colours but mostly I wear black.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: Be more concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid filler words (uh, umm) and incomplete phrases. Use linking words (for example, because) to connect ideas and include a brief reason or effect.
Ví dụ: I usually wear comfortable clothes because I value ease and a relaxed look. For example, I often choose baggy jeans paired with crop tops or T-shirts, as this combination suits my style and makes me feel confident.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: Give a clear, structured answer: state your preference, then explain with one or two specific situations and a brief reason. Remove hesitations and unfinished sentences. Use linking words like "however" or "so" to show contrast.
Ví dụ: It depends on the situation, but I generally prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable for everyday life. However, I wear smart clothes for formal events, such as weddings or business meetings, to look appropriate and respectful.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Be specific and finish your ideas: state clearly why you like T-shirts, give one or two concrete reasons (comfort, versatility), and avoid repetition and trailing off. Use a linking word to add a reason or example.
Ví dụ: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and very versatile for daily activities. For example, I often choose baggy black or white T-shirts since they match many outfits and reflect my personal style.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 66.0Gợi ý: Provide a direct answer and support it with a concise reason and an example. Avoid vague generalizations about others and finish your sentences. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect explanation.
Ví dụ: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer to keep my routine simple. I usually pick an outfit appropriate for the occasion and style it quickly, for example grabbing a T-shirt and jeans when I go shopping.
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: Answer directly, then explain the difference with concrete examples. Avoid repeating words and correct small vocabulary errors (e.g., "co-ords" or "tracksuit" instead of "cod sets"). Use a linking word like "but" to show contrast between going out and staying home.
Ví dụ: Not really — I wear casual clothes most days. For example, on weekdays I usually wear a T-shirt and jeans when I go out, while at home I prefer wearing pajamas or co-ord sets to stay comfortable.
What colour clothes do you like?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Be concise and give a specific reason plus an example. Avoid awkward phrasing; use linking words like "however" to contrast past and present preferences. Mention one or two other colours you now try to wear.
Ví dụ: I usually wear black because it's been my favourite colour since childhood and it’s easy to match. However, recently I've started trying colours like navy and olive green to add variety to my wardrobe.
× OK usually I wear comfortable clothes which suits me and also provide me comfort.
✓ OK usually I wear comfortable clothes which suit me and also provide me comfort.
The relative clause refers to 'clothes' (plural), so the verb must be plural 'suit' not 'suits'. Use 'provide' is correct because it agrees with plural subject. Suggestion: identify the head noun before choosing verb form; for plural nouns use plural verb forms.
× Umm specifically I prefer wearing baggy jeans with crop tops or T-shirts which gives me a vibe and also they are.
✓ Umm specifically I prefer wearing baggy jeans with crop tops or T-shirts which give me a vibe.
The clause 'which give me a vibe' refers to 'baggy jeans, crop tops or T-shirts' (plural), so use plural verb 'give'. The original ends with an incomplete fragment 'and also they are.' Remove the fragment or complete it. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and ensure clauses have a clear subject and verb.
× Actually depends upon the situation.
✓ It actually depends on the situation.
The original sentence lacks an explicit subject; English requires a subject like 'It' here. Also 'depends on' is the standard prepositional phrase, not 'depends upon' (though 'upon' is acceptable but less common). Suggestion: include subject pronoun 'it' and use 'depends on' for natural phrasing.
× I would prefer uh, smart clothes on occasions like weddings or any formal meeting and etcetera.
✓ I would prefer smart clothes on occasions like weddings or formal meetings.
'Any formal meeting and etcetera' is redundant and awkward. Remove filler 'uh' and 'etcetera'. Use plural 'formal meetings' to match 'occasions'. Suggestion: avoid fillers and redundancy; use plural for general statements.
× And uh, casual clothes is my thing.
✓ And casual clothes are my thing.
'Casual clothes' is plural, so the verb must be 'are' not 'is'. Also avoid filler 'uh'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and remove unnecessary fillers.
× So I prefer it all the time.
✓ So I prefer them all the time.
The pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers back to 'casual clothes' (plural). Use the plural pronoun 'them'. Suggestion: match pronoun number to its antecedent.
× I uh, went for shopping or go out with my.
✓ I go shopping or go out with my friends.
The sentence mixes past 'went' with present habitual actions 'go out'. It also ends with an incomplete phrase 'with my.' Add a noun like 'friends' and use consistent tense: present simple for habits. Suggestion: choose consistent tense and complete the object of prepositions.
× It's in my daily routine that I wear wear T-shirts mostly I prefer wearing baggy T-shirts which gives me a vibe and suits my aura.
✓ It's part of my daily routine that I wear T-shirts; mostly I prefer wearing baggy T-shirts which give me a vibe and suit my aura.
Remove duplicate 'wear'. Use semicolon or separate sentences to fix run-on. 'Baggy T-shirts' is plural, so verbs should be 'give' and 'suit'. Suggestion: avoid repetition, break long sentences, and ensure plural subjects take plural verbs.
× Umm mostly I prefer wearing black or white T-shirts because.
✓ Umm mostly I prefer wearing black or white T-shirts.
The sentence ends with an incomplete subordinate clause 'because.' Remove 'because' or complete the reason. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments; finish clauses or omit connecting words.
× No, I don't actually.
✓ No, I don't, actually.
This is punctuation/style more than grammar; insert comma for natural speech. However the sentence is acceptable. Suggestion: use commas to reflect spoken emphasis.
× I don't think much before going out like what I want to wear or how to I dress myself.
✓ I don't think much before going out about what I want to wear or how to dress myself.
The original 'how to I dress myself' has incorrect word order; use 'how to dress myself' or 'how I should dress'. Also include 'about' after 'think' when referring to topics. Suggestion: use correct question-word order in embedded clauses and include appropriate prepositions.
× I just pick up a dress according to the occasion and just wear it and style it.
✓ I just pick a dress according to the occasion and then wear and style it.
'Pick up a dress' is acceptable but 'pick a dress' is more natural. Avoid repeating 'just' and use 'then' to show sequence. Suggestion: streamline repetitive words and maintain natural verb patterns.
× I think it depends on the person itself that how he looks or.
✓ I think it depends on the person—how they look or what they prefer.
'Person itself' is unnatural; use 'the person' and avoid 'it' reflexive. 'How he looks' assumes male gender; use 'they' for neutrality. The sentence ends incomplete; complete the thought. Suggestion: use gender-neutral pronouns and finish clauses.
× Actually no as I prefer wearing casual clothes and comfortable clothes so I just pick any T-shirt or a jeans to go out and if I stay at my place I just wear night suit or cod sets.
✓ Actually no, as I prefer wearing casual and comfortable clothes, so I just pick any T-shirt or a pair of jeans to go out, and if I stay at home I just wear a night suit or cosy sets.
Use 'a pair of jeans' not 'a jeans'. Insert commas for clarity. 'Stay at my place' is more naturally 'stay at home'. 'Cod sets' is likely 'cozy sets' or 'cotton sets'; correct to 'cosy sets'. Suggestion: use 'a pair of' with jeans, add articles where needed, and use clearer vocabulary.
× Usually I wear black because it's my favorite colour since childhood, but at time as time passed I tried to discover some new colours.
✓ Usually I wear black because it's been my favorite colour since childhood, but as time passed I tried to discover some new colours.
Use present perfect 'has been' to express a state continuing from childhood. The phrase 'at time as time passed' is incorrect; use 'as time passed'. Suggestion: use appropriate tense for continued states and remove redundant words.
× So now sometimes I prefer wearing colours but mostly I wear black.
✓ So now sometimes I prefer wearing colours, but mostly I wear black.
Add comma before 'but' to separate clauses. Otherwise sentence is correct. Suggestion: use punctuation to improve clarity.