Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
I like to wear dresses because it can make me feel a strong sense of confidence and stylish. For example, I always choose dresses to socialize with my friends and take pictures. Post on WeChat Moments.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
I prefer very comfortable and casual clothes because it it is comfortable and convenient for studying and commuting.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Definitely. I like wearing T-shirts, umm, because it's comfortable and, uh, suitable for me to study in the library.
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
Definitely. I always spend a lot of time choosing clothes. Umm, because uh, I want to, uh, make up myself and, and uh.
Giám khảo
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Thí sinh
I wear uh dresses on weekend, on weekends, uh, to socialize with my friends and take pictures. Besides, I always choose T-shirt or comfortable clothes on weekdays.
Giám khảo
What colour clothes do you like?
Thí sinh
I like a blue clothes be it is a light color that can make me feel happy and it's a practical color that can serve all my outfit.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、句子更准确,并控制长度在3–4句。开头用主题句直接回答,然后用一两句具体说明原因和场景,避免不必要的断句或中文平台名词突兀出现。注意动词与主语一致(it → they 或 dresses make me)。
Ví dụ: I prefer wearing dresses because they make me feel confident and stylish. For instance, I often choose dresses when I meet friends or take photos for my social media. They help me look polished in social situations.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答要避免重复(不要重复说“comfortable”),并用连接词扩展理由。控制在2–3句并使用准确表达(e.g. for studying and commuting)。
Ví dụ: I usually opt for comfortable, casual clothing because it’s practical for studying and commuting. Also, relaxed outfits let me concentrate better during long hours at university.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 减少口头填充词(umm, uh),直接给出简洁回答并补充一条具体细节或例子。保持句子连贯并使用连接词如 because or so. 控制在2句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. T-shirts are comfortable and breathable, so I usually wear them when I study in the library for long periods.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不够具体且有许多口头语。应给出明确原因并举例说明(例如想显得得体、拍照、搭配颜色等),并用连词组织句子,控制在2–3句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often take time choosing outfits because I want to look presentable and coordinated. For example, I usually match colors and accessories before going out with friends.
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 避免重复与口头语,句子可更紧凑并用对比连接词(e.g. whereas, while)。具体说明场景让内容更丰富。
Ví dụ: Yes, I wear dresses on weekends when I meet friends and take photos, whereas on weekdays I prefer T-shirts and other comfortable clothes for studying and commuting.
What colour clothes do you like?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 修正语法错误并提高表达清晰度。用一两句说明为什么喜欢蓝色,给出具体搭配或场合的例子,避免笼统表述。
Ví dụ: I like light blue because it makes me feel cheerful and matches well with many outfits. For example, a light blue top pairs easily with jeans or a skirt for both casual and slightly dressy occasions.
× I like to wear dresses because it can make me feel a strong sense of confidence and stylish.
✓ I like to wear dresses because they make me feel confident and stylish.
句子中用法混淆:主语复数 "dresses" 与代词和谓语不一致,并且将名词短语 "a strong sense of confidence" 与形容词 "stylish" 并列显得笨拙。把 "can make me feel a strong sense of confidence and stylish" 改为更自然的形容词结构 "make me feel confident and stylish"。建议:注意用形容词(confident, stylish)描述感受,保持主语与动词一致并简化表达。
× For example, I always choose dresses to socialize with my friends and take pictures. Post on WeChat Moments.
✓ For example, I always choose dresses to socialize with my friends and take pictures to post on WeChat Moments.
原句把 "Post on WeChat Moments." 单独成句,缺少主语和动词连接,造成句子不完整。将其与前句合并,使用不定式短语 "to post on WeChat Moments" 来说明目的,保持句子完整。建议:避免把小片段单独成句,用连接词或不定式补足意义。
× I prefer very comfortable and casual clothes because it it is comfortable and convenient for studying and commuting.
✓ I prefer very comfortable and casual clothes because they are comfortable and convenient for studying and commuting.
原句中使用了重复的 "it it is" 并且代词 "it" 与复数名词 "clothes" 不一致。应使用复数代词 "they" 和复数系动词 "are"。建议:复数名词使用 "they are",并注意删除重复词。
× Definitely. I like wearing T-shirts, umm, because it's comfortable and, uh, suitable for me to study in the library.
✓ Definitely. I like wearing T-shirts because they're comfortable and suitable for studying in the library.
句中代词 "it's" 指代复数名词 "T-shirts" 应使用复数形式 "they're"。此外可删去语气词使表达更流畅。建议:复数名词用复数代词,口语中可简化填充词。
× Definitely. I always spend a lot of time choosing clothes. Umm, because uh, I want to, uh, make up myself and, and uh.
✓ Definitely. I always spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to make myself look good.
原句用法不当:先说主句又用不完整的从句 "Umm, because...",并且短语 "make up myself" 不自然。把原因从句并入主句,使用自然表达 "make myself look good"。建议:避免把 because 单独成句,使用正确短语描述“打扮/化妆自己”。
× I wear uh dresses on weekend, on weekends, uh, to socialize with my friends and take pictures.
✓ I wear dresses on weekends to socialize with my friends and take pictures.
原句中出现了单数 "weekend" 与复数 "on weekends" 的混用以及多余的填充词。常用表达为复数 "on weekends" 表示习惯性行为。建议:使用固定短语 "on weekends",删除重复与口语填充词。
× Besides, I always choose T-shirt or comfortable clothes on weekdays.
✓ Besides, I always choose T-shirts or other comfortable clothes on weekdays.
原句中 "T-shirt" 用单数不自然,应与一般习惯搭配复数或加上限定词;并且并列时需加上其他类别词以更完整。改为复数 "T-shirts" 并加入 "other" 使语义更清楚。建议:表示常规习惯时用复数名词(T-shirts)。
× I like a blue clothes be it is a light color that can make me feel happy and it's a practical color that can serve all my outfit.
✓ I like blue clothes because it is a light color that makes me feel happy and it's a practical color that goes with all my outfits.
原句问题多:"a blue clothes" 中冠词与复数名词冲突(应为 "blue clothes" 或 "a blue item");从句连接不自然,且动词时态和搭配需调整。改为 "blue clothes",用单数代词 "it" 指代颜色概念,并把 "serve all my outfit" 改为更自然的 "goes with all my outfits"。建议:复数名词不加不定冠词,注意固定搭配 "go with" 表示搭配,outfit 用复数表示多套搭配。