Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
I like to wear colorful and fashionable piece and I will also into 60s fashion so I like to wear like 60s mini dress.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
I like to wear casual clothes because smart clothes like suits are really really suffocated to wear and I don't like to the those clothes are dark.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
I like wearing T-shirts when I was in home or go to grocery store, but I'm not. I don't wear T-shirts in the when I go out with my friends.
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I spend 30 minutes to put together my outfits. So I think what you wear wear when I doing my makeup.
Giám khảo
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Thí sinh
No, I don't. However I changed my style of fashion depends on place where I go. For example, if I went to convenience store or supermarket near my house, I prefer.
Giám khảo
What colour clothes do you like?
Thí sinh
I don't have a specific color that I like, but people told me I wear a lot of green clothes so I think green is my favorite color to wear.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: Make the response more grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details (style and example). Use correct verb forms and plural/singular agreement, and avoid filler words.
Ví dụ: I prefer colorful, fashionable clothes. For example, I’m interested in 1960s fashion, so I often wear 60s-style mini dresses with bold patterns and bright colors.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer, then add a brief, natural reason. Correct grammar (use 'feel' instead of 'are', remove repetitions) and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid vague phrases.
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because suits feel too tight and formal. Also, smart clothes are often dark, which I don’t find cheerful, so I usually choose lighter, relaxed outfits.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 54.0Gợi ý: Answer directly and use correct tense and sentence structure. Use linking words to contrast situations (e.g. 'but', 'however') and be specific about occasions when you do or do not wear T-shirts.
Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts at home or when I go to the grocery store. However, I usually don’t wear T-shirts when I go out with friends because I prefer slightly smarter clothes for social occasions.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Give a concise direct answer and explain with a clear reason. Correct grammar and avoid repetition. Use a single supporting detail (time spent) and explain why briefly.
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I usually spend about 30 minutes putting together my outfit because I like my clothes to match my makeup and accessories.
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Điểm: 56.0Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence, then clarify with specific conditions. Use correct tense and complete your example. Use linking words like 'however' and 'for example' properly.
Ví dụ: Not usually — I don’t have very different weekday and weekend wardrobes. However, I do change my style depending on where I’m going; for example, I wear very casual clothes for quick trips to the nearby supermarket but dress a bit nicer for parties.
What colour clothes do you like?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a clear reason or supporting detail. Use natural phrasing and a short example to illustrate your preference.
Ví dụ: I don’t have one fixed color I always choose, but a lot of people say I wear green often, so I’d say green is my favorite color to wear because it suits my skin tone and feels fresh.
× I like to wear colorful and fashionable piece and I will also into 60s fashion so I like to wear like 60s mini dress.
✓ I like to wear colorful and fashionable pieces and I am also into 60s fashion, so I like to wear 60s mini dresses.
The student used 'piece' (singular) where a plural 'pieces' is required for general countable items; this is a quantifier/plurality error. Also 'I will also into' is incorrect verb usage and tense; use 'I am into' to express preference. 'Like' before '60s mini dress' is redundant and 'dress' should be plural when speaking generally. Suggestion: use plural for general statements about items ('pieces', 'dresses') and use 'be' + adjective/phrase to express preferences ('I am into 60s fashion').
× I like to wear colorful and fashionable piece and I will also into 60s fashion so I like to wear like 60s mini dress.
✓ I like to wear colorful and fashionable pieces and I am also into 60s fashion, so I like to wear 60s mini dresses.
The phrase '60s mini dress' needs no article when speaking generally, and 'a 60s mini dress' would be singular; here plural 'dresses' fits the general preference. Avoid unnecessary words like 'like' before the item. Suggestion: remove incorrect or redundant articles and words when making general statements.
× I like to wear casual clothes because smart clothes like suits are really really suffocated to wear and I don't like to the those clothes are dark.
✓ I like to wear casual clothes because smart clothes like suits are really suffocating to wear and I don't like those clothes because they are dark.
The student used 'suffocated' (past participle/adjective) incorrectly; the correct adjective is 'suffocating' to describe something that causes discomfort. Also 'I don't like to the those clothes are dark' is ungrammatical—use 'I don't like those clothes because they are dark.' Suggestion: use 'suffocating' for describing clothing that makes you feel confined, and connect clauses with 'because' correctly.
× I like to wear casual clothes because smart clothes like suits are really really suffocated to wear and I don't like to the those clothes are dark.
✓ I like to wear casual clothes because smart clothes like suits are really suffocating to wear and I don't like those clothes because they are dark.
Errors include 'suffocated to wear'—the correct collocation is 'suffocating to wear' or 'suffocating' without 'to'. Also 'I don't like to the those clothes' contains an unnecessary preposition 'to' and wrong demonstrative. Suggestion: remove incorrect prepositions and use correct collocations ('suffocating to wear' or 'suffocating').
× I like wearing T-shirts when I was in home or go to grocery store, but I'm not. I don't wear T-shirts in the when I go out with my friends.
✓ I like wearing T-shirts when I am at home or when I go to the grocery store, but I don't. I don't wear T-shirts when I go out with my friends.
The sentence mixes past tense 'was' with a habitual present context. Use present simple 'am' for routines. Prepositions are incorrect: use 'at home' and 'to the grocery store'. Also remove the extra article 'the' before 'when'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent for habitual actions (present simple) and use correct prepositions ('at home', 'to the grocery store').
× I like wearing T-shirts when I was in home or go to grocery store, but I'm not. I don't wear T-shirts in the when I go out with my friends.
✓ I like wearing T-shirts when I am at home or when I go to the grocery store, but I don't wear them when I go out with my friends.
The original has extra fragments ('but I'm not') and awkward repetition. Combine clauses clearly and use pronoun 'them' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: restructure sentences to clearly state contrast ('...but I don't wear them when...').
× Yes I do. I spend 30 minutes to put together my outfits. So I think what you wear wear when I doing my makeup.
✓ Yes, I do. I spend 30 minutes putting together my outfits. So I think about what I wear when I am doing my makeup.
Use gerund 'putting together' after 'spend' rather than 'to put together'. The clause 'I think what you wear wear' is confused; it should be 'I think about what I wear'. Also 'when I doing' needs auxiliary 'am' for present continuous. Suggestion: use 'spend' + gerund and include appropriate auxiliary verbs in continuous tenses.
× Yes I do. I spend 30 minutes to put together my outfits. So I think what you wear wear when I doing my makeup.
✓ Yes, I do. I spend 30 minutes putting together my outfits. So I think about what I wear when I am doing my makeup.
After 'spend' the correct pattern is 'spend time' + gerund ('putting together'), not infinitive. 'Doing' needs 'am doing' for present continuous. Suggestion: practice the 'spend + -ing' structure and present continuous forms.
× No, I don't. However I changed my style of fashion depends on place where I go. For example, if I went to convenience store or supermarket near my house, I prefer.
✓ No, I don't. However, I change my style depending on the place where I go. For example, if I go to the convenience store or supermarket near my house, I dress casually.
The student used past tense 'changed' and 'went' when describing habitual actions—use present simple 'change' and 'go'. 'Depends on place' should be 'depending on the place'. The final clause 'I prefer' is incomplete; specify what is preferred (e.g., 'I dress casually'). Suggestion: use present simple for habits and ensure clauses are complete.
× No, I don't. However I changed my style of fashion depends on place where I go. For example, if I went to convenience store or supermarket near my house, I prefer.
✓ No, I don't. However, I change my style depending on the place where I go. For example, if I go to the convenience store or supermarket near my house, I dress casually.
Use 'depending on' rather than 'depends on' in this sentence, and include 'the' before 'convenience store' or 'supermarket'. Remove incorrect past tense 'went' and replace with 'go'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions and articles for places.
× No, I don't. However I changed my style of fashion depends on place where I go. For example, if I went to convenience store or supermarket near my house, I prefer.
✓ No, I don't. However, I change my style depending on the place where I go. For example, if I go to the convenience store or supermarket near my house, I dress casually.
The student omitted definite articles before 'convenience store' and 'supermarket'. When referring to a specific nearby store, use 'the convenience store' or 'the supermarket'. Suggestion: include 'the' when talking about a specific known place.
× I don't have a specific color that I like, but people told me I wear a lot of green clothes so I think green is my favorite color to wear.
✓ I don't have a specific color that I like, but people have told me I wear a lot of green, so I think green is my favorite color to wear.
The phrase 'green clothes' is acceptable, but 'people told me I wear a lot of green clothes' is slightly awkward; using 'have told' matches the present relevance. Also 'wear a lot of green' is more natural than repeating 'clothes'. Suggestion: use present perfect for experiences affecting the present and simplify noun phrases.
× I don't have a specific color that I like, but people told me I wear a lot of green clothes so I think green is my favorite color to wear.
✓ I don't have a specific color that I like, but people have told me I wear a lot of green, so I think green is my favorite color to wear.
Use present perfect 'have told' to indicate that people told the speaker in the past with relevance now. Suggestion: prefer present perfect for past actions with present relevance.