Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
Like to wear the laugh laugh clothing. Umm I think it is normal style is the best.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
I prefer to the small clothes because the is the IT is a simple style.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
I like to wear the T-shirt because the IT is easy to wear the clothes.
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
I think it is not. It doesn't have a time to wear the clothes.
Giám khảo
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do. I like to wearing a lot of different clothes in the on the weekend, so because. I like to go outside.
Giám khảo
What colour clothes do you like?
Thí sinh
I like to, I, I like, uh, black, black shirt. And so it's just I like.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 質問に直接答え、具体性と流暢さを高める練習をしてください。短く明確なトピック文を作り、その後に理由や具体例を1〜2文で付けます。口語の躊躇(um, uh)を減らし、曖昧な表現("laugh laugh clothing")は避けて、正しい語彙(e.g. casual, sporty, classic)を使いましょう。
Ví dụ: I prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable and easy to move in. For example, I usually wear jeans and a soft sweater on weekdays since I study and travel by bus.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: まず明確にどちらが好きか答え、理由を1〜2文で述べてください。曖昧な語や不正確な構文("small clothes", "the is the IT")を避け、'comfortable and casual' や 'smart' の語彙を正しく使う練習をしてください。接続詞(because, so)を使って論理を示しましょう。
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because they fit my daily routine. For instance, I often choose loose shirts and sneakers since they are practical and comfortable for work and commuting.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 短い肯定文で始め、その後で理由と具体例を続けてください。'easy to wear'は良い表現ですが、文法を整えて自然な語順にしましょう。代名詞の誤使用("the IT")を直してください。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to match with jeans. For example, I often wear a plain white T-shirt when I hang out with friends.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 直接的に短く答え(Yes/No)、その理由を1〜2文で述べてください。現在形や否定文の正しい構造を使えるよう練習し、語順と代名詞の間違いを直しましょう(例: 'I don't spend much time choosing clothes.')。
Ví dụ: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually pick simple outfits. For instance, I often wear jeans and a T-shirt, so choosing is quick.
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 肯定で始めたのは良いですが、続けて理由と具体例を論理的に述べてください。不自然な語順や余分な語('in the on the weekend', 'so because')を避け、時間表現(on weekdays, at the weekend)を正しく使いましょう。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. On weekdays I usually wear smart-casual clothes for classes, but at the weekend I wear more relaxed outfits like hoodies and jeans because I go out with friends.
What colour clothes do you like?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 色をはっきりと一度言い、その理由や具体的なアイテム例を付け加えてください。躊躇語(uh, um)を減らし、繰り返しを避けて流暢に話す練習をしましょう。
Ví dụ: I prefer black clothes because they look neat and are easy to match. For example, I often wear a black shirt or jacket when I want a simple, smart look.
× Like to wear the laugh laugh clothing.
✓ I like to wear casual clothing.
学生は'like to wear the laugh laugh clothing'と述べていますが、'laugh laugh'は英語の形容表現ではなく誤用です。ここでは衣服の種類を表すために形容詞 'casual' を使い、主語を明確にして文を完全にする必要があります。改善策: 服の性質を表す正しい形容詞(casual, formal, comfortable など)を学び、主語と動詞を明示して短い完全な文を作る練習をしてください.
× Umm I think it is normal style is the best.
✓ Umm, I think a normal style is the best.
元文は冗長で 'it is' が不必要に2回出ています。具体的なスタイルを一般的に述べる場合は不定冠詞 'a' を用いて 'a normal style' とします。改善策: 'it is' を繰り返さない、冠詞の使い分け(a/an/the)を練習してください.
× I prefer to the small clothes because the is the IT is a simple style.
✓ I prefer small clothes because they are a simple style.
原文は不適切な語順と不要な語('to the', 'the is the IT is')が含まれています。'prefer' の目的語は動詞の不定詞ではなく名詞句(small clothes)でよく表現されます。複数の服を指すので代名詞 'they' を用いて 'they are' と続けます。改善策: 不要な語句を省き、名詞句と代名詞の基本的な一致を意識して書いてください.
× I like to wear the T-shirt because the IT is easy to wear the clothes.
✓ I like to wear T-shirts because they are easy to wear.
単数形 'the T-shirt' より一般的な好みを述べるために複数形 'T-shirts' を使う方が自然です。また 'the IT is' は不要で、複数の服を指す場合 'they are' を用います。'to wear the clothes' のような重複も避けます。改善策: 一般的な表現には複数形を使う練習をし、冗長な語を省くこと。
× I think it is not. It doesn't have a time to wear the clothes.
✓ I don't think so. I don't have much time to choose clothes.
'I think it is not' は英語として自然ではありません。否定を表すには 'I don't think so' が一般的です。また 'doesn't have a time' は主語が欠けており時制も不適切です。衣服を選ぶ時間がないという意味なら 'I don't have much time to choose clothes' とします。改善策: 英語の否定表現と 'have time' の構文を学び、動詞の主語一致に注意してください.
× I like to wearing a lot of different clothes in the on the weekend, so because. I like to go outside.
✓ I like wearing a lot of different clothes on the weekend because I like to go outside.
'like to wearing' は不正確で、'like' の後には不定詞 'to' または動名詞 '-ing' のどちらか一方を使います('like wearing' または 'like to wear')。さらに 'in the on the weekend' は冗長で前置詞は 'on the weekend' が正しいです。また 'so because' は不要です。改善策: 'like' の後の形(to+動詞または動名詞)を統一し、前置詞の使い方を確認してください.
× I like to, I, I like, uh, black, black shirt. And so it's just I like.
✓ I like black shirts.
繰り返しや冗長な表現が多く、単純に 'I like black shirts.' と言えば意図が明確になります。複数のシャツを一般的に好む場合は複数形を使います。改善策: 言いたいことを短くまとめる練習をし、名詞の単数・複数の違いを意識してください.