Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you use headphones?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I use it every day and it's very helpful. I can listening to music when I'm working outside and although use it to practice my listening skills and I it can avoiding noises.
Giám khảo
What type of headphones do you use?
Thí sinh
I think around two or three hours a day I using my headphones to practice listening skill and use for listening to music and I feel very relaxed and happy when do them.
Giám khảo
When would you use headphones?
Thí sinh
I use headphones when the background is very noisy. I can use to block the noise and also listen to my love song. Also when I'm playing games online with my friends I use it so my mother don't know me to play game.
Giám khảo
In what conditions would you not use headphones?
Thí sinh
I would not use my headphone in many specific case, such as when I'm talking with other people. I will not use my headphone or I when I'm enjoy the fresh air at the.
Giám khảo
Is wearing headphones comfortable?
Thí sinh
My old half was was little bit not fit to me so I it could it make me a minor hurt so I to change it change to new headphone. I is very comfortable for me.
Do you use headphones?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Improve grammar and sentence structure: use subject-verb agreement, correct verb forms and articles. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details linked logically. Use linking words like 'also' or 'because' correctly. Keep answers concise (no more than 4–5 sentences).
Ví dụ: Yes, I use headphones every day. I mainly use them to listen to music when I'm outside because they help me concentrate. I also use them to practice my listening skills and to block out background noise.
What type of headphones do you use?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: Answer the question directly by naming the type or model of headphones, then give brief details about usage. Correct verb forms and order: state frequency and reasons clearly using linking words like 'and' or 'so'.
Ví dụ: I use over-ear Bluetooth headphones. I wear them for two to three hours a day to listen to music and practice listening exercises, and they make me feel relaxed.
When would you use headphones?
Điểm: 56.0Gợi ý: Be specific and natural: give clear situations and reasons, correct grammar (e.g., 'so my mother doesn't know'). Use linking words like 'also' or 'for example' to connect ideas. Avoid informal or unclear phrases.
Ví dụ: I use headphones when the background is noisy because they block out distractions. I also wear them to listen to my favorite songs while studying. For example, I use them when I'm playing online games so I can hear teammates clearly without disturbing my family.
In what conditions would you not use headphones?
Điểm: 54.0Gợi ý: Provide concise conditions and correct grammar: use plural/singular consistently and finish sentences. Give specific examples and use linking words like 'for instance' or 'when'.
Ví dụ: I wouldn't use headphones when I'm talking with other people because I need to listen and respond. I also avoid them when I'm outdoors enjoying fresh air or when safety is important, for instance while crossing the street.
Is wearing headphones comfortable?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Answer directly (yes/no) then explain briefly with clear cause-effect language. Correct tense and pronouns, and be specific about what made old headphones uncomfortable and why the new ones are better.
Ví dụ: Yes, wearing my new headphones is comfortable. My old pair was too tight and caused slight pain, so I replaced them with a better-fitting model that sits lightly on my ears.
× Yes I do. I use it every day and it's very helpful.
✓ Yes, I do. I use them every day and they're very helpful.
The plural noun 'headphones' requires the plural pronoun 'them' and plural verb form 'they're'. Use commas after introductory elements ('Yes, I do').
× I can listening to music when I'm working outside and although use it to practice my listening skills and I it can avoiding noises.
✓ I can listen to music when I'm working outside, and I also use them to practice my listening skills and to avoid noise.
After modal 'can' use the base verb 'listen' not 'listening'. 'Although' is misused; use 'also' for addition. Use infinitive 'to avoid' instead of 'avoiding'. Use plural 'them' for headphones and uncountable 'noise'.
× I think around two or three hours a day I using my headphones to practice listening skill and use for listening to music and I feel very relaxed and happy when do them.
✓ I think I use my headphones for around two or three hours a day to practice my listening skills and to listen to music, and I feel very relaxed and happy when I do.
Use present simple 'I use' not 'I using'. 'Listening skill' should be plural 'listening skills'. Use infinitive 'to listen'. Add subject 'I' before 'do'. Maintain parallel structure with 'to practice' and 'to listen'.
× I use headphones when the background is very noisy. I can use to block the noise and also listen to my love song.
✓ I use headphones when the background is very noisy. I can use them to block the noise and also listen to my favorite songs.
After 'use' include object 'them' for headphones. 'Love song' is better as plural 'songs' or 'favorite songs' for natural English. 'Favorite' is adjective choice, not grammar error but improves clarity.
× Also when I'm playing games online with my friends I use it so my mother don't know me to play game.
✓ Also, when I'm playing games online with my friends I use them so my mother doesn't know I'm playing.
Use plural 'them' for headphones. Use correct auxiliary 'doesn't' for third person singular 'my mother'. Use present continuous 'I'm playing' as complement. Avoid 'know me to play game' which is ungrammatical.
× I would not use my headphone in many specific case, such as when I'm talking with other people.
✓ I would not use my headphones in many specific cases, such as when I'm talking with other people.
Use plural 'headphones' and plural 'cases' to match meaning. 'My headphone' is singular and incorrect here. Use plural for general situations.
× I will not use my headphone or I when I'm enjoy the fresh air at the.
✓ I will not use my headphones when I'm enjoying the fresh air outside.
Remove extraneous 'or I'. Use 'enjoying' (present participle) after 'I'm'. Add missing object 'outside' instead of 'at the.' and use plural 'headphones'.
× My old half was was little bit not fit to me so I it could it make me a minor hurt so I to change it change to new headphone.
✓ My old headphones were a little bit uncomfortable for me, so they caused me minor pain and I changed them for new headphones.
Use plural 'headphones' and plural verb 'were'. 'A little bit' modifies adjective 'uncomfortable'. 'Caused me minor pain' is natural. Use past tense 'changed' for completed action and plural 'them'/'headphones'. Remove extra repeated words.
× I is very comfortable for me.
✓ They are very comfortable for me.
Refer to 'headphones' with plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are'. 'I is' is ungrammatical; the speaker should say 'They are comfortable for me.'