Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you use headphones?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I use it every day.
Giám khảo
What type of headphones do you use?
Thí sinh
I use Airpods, it's from Apple and it's quality was very nice.
Giám khảo
When would you use headphones?
Thí sinh
When I was working, studying or reading, I used airport to listen to music.
Giám khảo
In what conditions would you not use headphones?
Thí sinh
If I meet my friend or somebody say something to me, I don't use the headphones because I think the polite is most important.
Giám khảo
Is wearing headphones comfortable?
Thí sinh
Yes, because I can listen to music and put it aloud and nobody feels noisy.
Do you use headphones?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并包含主句加一到两句具体细节,避免语法小错误(如代词和单复数)。可以说出使用场景和频率来丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I use headphones almost every day, mainly during my commute and while I study at home.
What type of headphones do you use?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 注意语法和表达的准确性,避免错误的代词、所有格和时态(例如“it's from Apple”应为“they’re made by Apple”)。同时可加入简短原因说明音质或舒适度。
Ví dụ: I use AirPods, which are made by Apple. I like them because they’re lightweight and have clear sound quality.
When would you use headphones?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答需用现在时并纠正词汇错误(把“airport”改为“AirPods”或更合适的词)。结构上用主题句并用连接词列举具体场景,保持简洁。
Ví dụ: I usually wear headphones when I’m working, studying or reading, especially when I need to concentrate or block out background noise.
In what conditions would you not use headphones?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 句子要更地道,改进语序和用词(如用“when someone speaks to me”)。可以加一两个具体例子说明社交礼仪。
Ví dụ: I wouldn’t wear headphones when I’m talking to friends or when someone is trying to get my attention, because I think it’s impolite and can make communication difficult.
Is wearing headphones comfortable?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰且有语法和逻辑问题(“put it aloud”不自然)。应给出明确理由并用连词扩展,例如谈舒适度、降噪或音量控制等。
Ví dụ: Yes, I find them comfortable because they fit well and let me listen at a reasonable volume without disturbing other people.
× Yes I do. I use it every day.
✓ Yes, I do. I use them every day.
原句中“headphones”为复数名词,但代词使用了单数“it”,与主语不一致,属于主谓/代词数一致错误(Subject-verb/pronoun agreement)。应使用复数代词“them”。另外在“Yes”和“I”之间加逗号以符合书面标点习惯。
× I use Airpods, it's from Apple and it's quality was very nice.
✓ I use AirPods. They're from Apple and their quality is very good.
原句存在复数与单数不一致的问题:AirPods为复数形式,应分别使用复数代词“they/their”。此外“it's quality was very nice”在时态和词性上不恰当,改为现在时“is”和形容词“good”更自然。句子也应拆成两句以改善结构。中文说明:AirPods是复数,代词也要用复数;保持时态一致并使用恰当形容词。
× When I was working, studying or reading, I used airport to listen to music.
✓ When I'm working, studying, or reading, I use headphones to listen to music.
原句时态不一致,题目问“when would you use”要求一般现在时习惯性动作,故应使用现在时“I'm”/“I use”。另外“used airport”为词语错误,应为“use headphones”。中文说明:根据语境用一般现在时描述习惯动作;“airport”是“机场”,与上下文不符,应使用“headphones”。
× If I meet my friend or somebody say something to me, I don't use the headphones because I think the polite is most important.
✓ If I meet my friend or somebody says something to me, I don't use headphones because I think politeness is most important.
句中存在多个问题:从句主谓不一致“somebody say”应为“somebody says”(第三人称单数)。“the headphones”中的定冠词多余,改为复数泛指“headphones”。“the polite”用词错误,正确名词为“politeness”。中文说明:注意第三人称单数动词形式;泛指可省冠词;抽象名词用politeness。
× Yes, because I can listen to music and put it aloud and nobody feels noisy.
✓ Yes, because I can listen to music and play it loudly so that it doesn't bother anyone.
原句用词和词类错误:"put it aloud"不自然,应使用动词短语“play it loudly”。"nobody feels noisy"表达不当,应为“it doesn't bother anyone”或“nobody is bothered”。中文说明:选择恰当动词短语表达声音播放;用被动/影响结构表达“不会打扰到别人”。