Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you use headphones?
Thí sinh
I really don't like using headphones because my ears are really getting irritated when using it for a long time.
Giám khảo
What type of headphones do you use?
Thí sinh
They might have said earlier I don't really use headphones, and if I'm using one it is the headphones with the wire connected, not the Airpods 1.
Giám khảo
When would you use headphones?
Thí sinh
Usually I'm using headphones when I am watching a video lecture that really needs a focus and I don't wanna be bothered with the excessive noise outside.
Giám khảo
In what conditions would you not use headphones?
Thí sinh
I don't really want to use headphones when watching a movie using my iPod.
Giám khảo
Is wearing headphones comfortable?
Thí sinh
Like what I've said earlier, for me using a headphones for a really long time is very uncomfortable.
Do you use headphones?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: Start with a clear direct topic sentence and keep it concise. Avoid repetition (e.g., “really” twice) and add a brief specific reason or an alternative. Use one or two linking words to make it coherent.
Ví dụ: Not really. I avoid headphones because they irritate my ears if I wear them for more than about 30 minutes. Instead, I usually use speakers or short earbuds for quick calls.
What type of headphones do you use?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: Begin with a direct answer naming the type, then give a concise reason. Remove uncertain phrasing like “They might have said earlier”. Be specific about the model or feature and use a linking word to connect reason.
Ví dụ: I usually use wired over-ear headphones. I prefer wired models because they give more reliable sound and I don't want to worry about battery life.
When would you use headphones?
Điểm: 76.0Gợi ý: Good direct answer and reason. Improve naturalness by using slightly more formal language (avoid texting contractions like “wanna”) and add a short time reference or example. Use a linking word to connect purpose and condition.
Ví dụ: I usually wear headphones when I watch video lectures because I need to concentrate and block out background noise. For example, I put them on during evening study sessions at home.
In what conditions would you not use headphones?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Answer directly and expand with a specific reason and a linking phrase. Avoid vague phrasing; explain why you avoid them in that situation and provide an alternative.
Ví dụ: I avoid headphones when watching movies on my iPod because the small device has poor sound and I prefer using external speakers for better audio quality.
Is wearing headphones comfortable?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer and add a brief specific detail (how long is “a really long time”, what exactly is uncomfortable). Remove filler phrases like “Like what I've said earlier.”
Ví dụ: Not really. Wearing headphones for more than 30–40 minutes becomes uncomfortable for me, especially around the ears and headband, so I take regular breaks.
× I really don't like using headphones because my ears are really getting irritated when using it for a long time.
✓ I really don't like using headphones because my ears get really irritated when I use them for a long time.
The sentence mixes singular and plural pronouns: 'headphones' is plural so the pronoun should be 'them' not 'it'. Also the progressive 'are really getting irritated' is unnatural for a general statement; use simple present 'get' to describe habitual or general reactions. Change 'using it' to 'I use them' to match subject and plurality. Grammar problem type ID: 12
× They might have said earlier I don't really use headphones, and if I'm using one it is the headphones with the wire connected, not the Airpods 1.
✓ I might have said earlier that I don't really use headphones, and if I do use them they are wired headphones, not AirPods.
Use 'I might have said earlier' to express possible prior statement; include conjunction 'that' after 'said' for clarity. 'If I'm using one' is awkward because 'one' suggests singular; use 'if I do use them' to match plural 'headphones'. 'the headphones with the wire connected' is unidiomatic; use 'wired headphones'. 'Airpods 1' should be 'AirPods'. This corrects pronoun and article usage and improves natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID: 22
× Usually I'm using headphones when I am watching a video lecture that really needs a focus and I don't wanna be bothered with the excessive noise outside.
✓ Usually I use headphones when I watch a video lecture that requires concentration and I don't want to be bothered by excessive outside noise.
For habitual actions, use the simple present ('I use', 'I watch') rather than present continuous ('I'm using'). 'Needs a focus' is incorrect collocation; use 'requires concentration'. Avoid informal 'wanna' in standard responses; use 'want to'. Use 'bothered by' rather than 'bothered with' and place adjectives appropriately: 'excessive outside noise'. Grammar problem type ID: 6
× I don't really want to use headphones when watching a movie using my iPod.
✓ I don't really want to use headphones when watching a movie on my iPod.
Use the preposition 'on' with devices when referring to watching or playing content ('on my iPod'), not 'using'. The verb repetition 'watching a movie using my iPod' is awkward; 'watching a movie on my iPod' is concise and correct. Grammar problem type ID: 11
× Like what I've said earlier, for me using a headphones for a really long time is very uncomfortable.
✓ As I said earlier, using headphones for a really long time is very uncomfortable for me.
'A headphones' is incorrect because 'headphones' is plural and does not take 'a'; remove the article. 'Like what I've said earlier' is informal and slightly awkward; 'As I said earlier' is more natural. Place 'for me' at the end for clarity. Also prefer simple present 'is' for a general statement. Grammar problem type ID: 22