Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you use headphones?
Thí sinh
Yes, I use a headphone because it is very useful uh, may I get train uh, the train the noise of train distracted me uh so headphone help me concentrate on my.
Giám khảo
What type of headphones do you use?
Thí sinh
I don't know much uh, what type my headphone is uh, but it is quite wrong and very cute and the sound is very good.
Giám khảo
When would you use headphones?
Thí sinh
I use hate from when I get trying because it help me concentrate concentrate on my task and I can I can enjoy good sound and music.
Giám khảo
In what conditions would you not use headphones?
Thí sinh
Uh, I would not you they had to find uh in condition where I spend time with my friend, umm, I mean that we enjoyed a movie or music together.
Giám khảo
Is wearing headphones comfortable?
Thí sinh
I feel uncomfortable when I wear headphone because I I feel it tying up my head so my I have my headache when I use headphone.
Do you use headphones?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: まず、文法と語順を整えて短く明確に答える練習をしてください。具体的には「Yes, I do. I use headphones when I travel by train because they block noise and help me concentrate.」のようにtopic sentenceを述べ、続けて理由を一つか二つで補足します。また、フィラー(uh, umm)を減らし、単語の数を5文以内に収めてください。発音では “headphones” と複数形で自然に言えるように練習しましょう。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I usually wear headphones when I travel by train because they block out noise and help me concentrate on my work.
What type of headphones do you use?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 質問に直接答えてから理由や特徴を具体的に述べる練習をしてください。曖昧な表現(“I don't know much”)や意味の通らない語(“quite wrong”)を避け、代わりにデザインや形式(over-ear, in-ear, wireless)や音質の特徴を使いましょう。語彙を増やし、5文以内で端的にまとめてください。
Ví dụ: I use over-ear wireless headphones. They are compact and comfortable, and the sound quality is very clear and bass-heavy.
When would you use headphones?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 文を正しく組み立てて、同じ語の繰り返しを避ける練習をしてください。まず「When」の質問には時や状況で答え、次に理由を付けます。例えば “I use them when I’m studying or commuting because they help me concentrate and let me enjoy music.” のように、linking words(because)を使って論理を明確にしましょう。
Ví dụ: I usually use headphones when I’m studying or commuting because they help me concentrate and allow me to enjoy music without bothering others.
In what conditions would you not use headphones?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 否定の状況を問う質問には最初に直接答え、その後具体例を挙げて説明してください。冗長なフィラーを減らし、文を簡潔に保ちます。例えば “I wouldn’t use headphones when I’m with friends, especially if we watch a movie or share music.” のように言います。
Ví dụ: I wouldn’t wear headphones when I’m with friends, especially if we’re watching a movie or listening to music together.
Is wearing headphones comfortable?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: まず簡潔に快適かどうか答え(Yes/No+簡潔な理由)、次に具体的な説明を加えてください。言い回しを自然にして、冗長な繰り返しをなくします。例えば “I often find them uncomfortable because they press on my head and sometimes give me a headache.” のように述べてください。
Ví dụ: I often find headphones uncomfortable because they press on my head and sometimes give me a headache.
× Yes, I use a headphone because it is very useful uh, may I get train uh, the train the noise of train distracted me uh so headphone help me concentrate on my.
✓ Yes, I use headphones because they are very useful. On the train, the noise distracted me, so headphones help me concentrate.
'a headphone' is incorrect; 'headphones' (plural) is the common form for this device. Use plural pronouns 'they' and verb agreement 'are'. 'May I get train' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is 'on the train'. Include articles and prepositions ('the train', 'on the train'). Use 'so headphones help me concentrate' for clear result clause. Improvements: learn countable/uncountable and typical noun forms (headphones plural), and use correct preposition 'on' for vehicles.
× I don't know much uh, what type my headphone is uh, but it is quite wrong and very cute and the sound is very good.
✓ I don't know much about what type my headphones are, but they are quite small and very cute, and the sound is very good.
Use 'headphones' plural and 'are' for plural agreement. Add 'about' after 'know much' to complete the expression. 'Quite wrong' is inappropriate; likely intended 'quite small' or similar adjective. Pronoun must match plural noun: 'they are'. Improvements: check noun number and subject-verb agreement, and use correct collocations ('know about').
× I use hate from when I get trying because it help me concentrate concentrate on my task and I can I can enjoy good sound and music.
✓ I use headphones when I am trying to concentrate because they help me focus on my tasks, and I can enjoy good sound and music.
Correct present progressive 'am trying' for ongoing action and plural 'headphones' with plural verb 'help'. 'Concentrate concentrate' is repetition; use 'focus'. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' for general statement. Improvements: use present simple or present continuous appropriately ('I use... when I am trying') and match subject-verb number.
× Uh, I would not you they had to find uh in condition where I spend time with my friend, umm, I mean that we enjoyed a movie or music together.
✓ I would not use them in situations where I spend time with my friends, for example when we enjoy a movie or music together.
Original has incorrect word order and wrong verbs ('would not you they had to find'). Use 'use them' as correct object and 'situations where' for condition. 'Friend' plural 'friends' fits general statement. 'Enjoyed' should be present 'enjoy' for habitual situations. Improvements: simplify sentence structure, place verbs close to subjects, and maintain tense consistency for habitual actions.
× I feel uncomfortable when I wear headphone because I I feel it tying up my head so my I have my headache when I use headphone.
✓ I feel uncomfortable when I wear headphones because I feel them tightening on my head, so I get a headache when I use headphones.
Use plural 'headphones' and plural pronoun 'them'. 'Tying up my head' is incorrect collocation; use 'tightening on my head'. 'I have my headache' should be 'I get a headache'. Improvements: use correct collocations for physical sensations ('tightening on my head'), consistent noun number, and correct phrasing for experiencing headaches ('get a headache').