Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you use headphones?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often use headphones when I am in the public space. If I don't want to disturb others, I need to use headphones to listen some voice in my phone or my computer.
Giám khảo
What type of headphones do you use?
Thí sinh
I usually use small earphones because they are compact and handless. I can bring it everywhere I want go.
Giám khảo
When would you use headphones?
Thí sinh
I usually use earphone when I'm on the subway because I like to listen to music or podcasts to relax and down out the noise. Sometimes I also listen to Edie books if I wants to make my communes productive.
Giám khảo
In what conditions would you not use headphones?
Thí sinh
I don't usually use headphones in my bedroom because it's my private space and I'm often alone there and at that time I don't have to worry about disturbing others people.
Giám khảo
Is wearing headphones comfortable?
Thí sinh
No, I don't find wear headphones are comfortable. If I wear earphones for more than hours my ears start to feel pain, painful.
Do you use headphones?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接、简洁,并注意语法与用词。可以开门见山说明是否使用耳机,然后给出一到两个具体原因,避免冗长和语法错误(如“listen some voice”应为“listen to audio”)。注意冠词和介词用法,以及时态和主谓一致。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often use headphones in public. I wear them to avoid disturbing others and to focus on music or podcasts while commuting.
What type of headphones do you use?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答需注意词汇准确性和句子完整性。用词应精确(如“handless”不合适,改为“hands-free”或“lightweight”),注意代词和动词形式一致(‘it’应为‘them’),保持句子不超过5句并自然衔接。
Ví dụ: I usually use small in-ear earphones because they are compact and lightweight. They are easy to carry and fit comfortably in my pocket.
When would you use headphones?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要更准确并注意拼写与语法错误(如“down out the noise”、“Edie books”、“wants”、“communes”)。用连接词提高连贯性,给出具体情况和例子。避免重复并保证词汇恰当。
Ví dụ: I usually wear earphones on the subway to relax and block out background noise. I also listen to podcasts or audiobooks to make my commute more productive.
In what conditions would you not use headphones?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答思路清晰,但需简化句子并修正小错误(如“disturbing others people”应为“disturbing other people”或“disturbing others”)。可以补充一两句说明替代做法或感受以丰富内容。
Ví dụ: I usually don't use headphones in my bedroom because it's private and I'm often alone. Instead, I enjoy playing music aloud or reading without audio.
Is wearing headphones comfortable?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答需语法正确并更自然表达个人体验。改用简短清晰的句子描述不适原因并给出具体时长。避免重复词汇(如“pain, painful”)。
Ví dụ: Not really. I find in-ear headphones uncomfortable after about an hour because my ears start to hurt, so I prefer over-ear models for long listening sessions.
× Yes, I often use headphones when I am in the public space.
✓ Yes, I often use headphones when I am in public spaces.
“in the public space” 用法不自然。英語中更常說 “in public” 表示在公共場所;若要指多個或不特定的場所可用複數 “public spaces”。建議使用固定搭配 “in public” 或 “in public spaces”。
× If I don't want to disturb others, I need to use headphones to listen some voice in my phone or my computer.
✓ If I don't want to disturb others, I need to use headphones to listen to some audio on my phone or computer.
“listen” 後面應接介詞 “to” 表示“聽……”。“some voice” 不自然,應用 “some audio” 或 “some music”。另外 “in my phone or my computer” 應改為常用搭配 “on my phone or computer”。這裡屬於動詞與介詞搭配問題和名詞選擇。
× I usually use small earphones because they are compact and handless.
✓ I usually use small earphones because they are compact and hands-free.
“handless” 不是正確的詞;想表達不用手持的意思應用 “hands-free”。這是代詞/詞彙使用不當導致的錯誤。
× I can bring it everywhere I want go.
✓ I can take them everywhere I want to go.
代詞與先行詞不一致:前面提到的是複數 “earphones/they”,所以代詞應為 “them” 而不是 “it”。此外動詞片語應為 “want to go”。“bring” 雖可用但搭配人稱語境更自然用 “take”。這屬於主謂/代詞一致與動詞不定式用法問題。
× I usually use earphone when I'm on the subway because I like to listen to music or podcasts to relax and down out the noise.
✓ I usually use earphones when I'm on the subway because I like to listen to music or podcasts to relax and drown out the noise.
“earphone” 單數用法不合常規,應為複數 “earphones”。另外 “down out the noise” 是錯誤搭配,正確表達為 “drown out the noise”。這屬於單複數和短語動詞用法問題。
× Sometimes I also listen to Edie books if I wants to make my communes productive.
✓ Sometimes I also listen to audiobooks if I want to make my commute productive.
“wants” 與主語 “I” 在第三人稱單數上的使用錯誤,應為 “want”。此外 “Edie books” 應為 “audiobooks”,“communes” 應為 “commute”(通勤)。整句包含第三人稱動詞形式錯用及詞彙錯誤。
× I don't usually use headphones in my bedroom because it's my private space and I'm often alone there and at that time I don't have to worry about disturbing others people.
✓ I don't usually use headphones in my bedroom because it's my private space and I'm often alone there, so I don't have to worry about disturbing other people.
“others people” 是錯誤搭配,應為 “other people”。句子中使用連接詞 “so” 更自然。這是介詞/限定詞與名詞搭配錯誤。
× No, I don't find wear headphones are comfortable.
✓ No, I don't find wearing headphones comfortable.
原句結構混亂,重複動詞並且不定式/動名詞使用錯誤。正確結構為 “find + (object) + adjective”,因此應用動名詞 “wearing headphones” 作為主語或賓語,再接形容詞 “comfortable”。
× If I wear earphones for more than hours my ears start to feel pain, painful.
✓ If I wear earphones for more than an hour, my ears start to feel painful.
“more than hours” 缺少數量詞,應為 “more than an hour” 或 “more than two hours” 等。此外 “feel pain, painful” 重複且用法不當,應選擇 “feel painful” 或 “start to hurt”。建議用 “my ears start to hurt” 或 “my ears start to feel painful”。