Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer sad or happy music?
Thí sinh
I prefer happy music, I like K pop music because Blackpink is my hero.
Giám khảo
Does happy music make you feel more excited?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. Happy music make me feel more excited. When I'm sad, I often listen to music. It makes me good.
Giám khảo
Have you taken any music classes?
Thí sinh
Guitar class I taken.
Giám khảo
Do you listen to music while doing other things?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I listen to music when I do housework or. Reading.
Do you prefer sad or happy music?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然流畅,并注意句子结构和语法。可以开头直接给出观点,然后简要说明原因,避免不必要的重复。可将“K pop”改为“K-pop”,并把“Blackpink is my hero”改为更地道的表达如“I’m a big fan of Blackpink”。
Ví dụ: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood. For example, I often listen to K-pop, and I’m a big fan of Blackpink because their songs are energetic and catchy.
Does happy music make you feel more excited?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要注意语法(主谓一致)和用词准确。可以先直接回答,然后用一到两句具体说明什么时候会听音乐以及带来的感受,避免模糊表达如“it makes me good”。
Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Happy music makes me feel more energetic and upbeat. For instance, when I’m feeling down I listen to lively songs and they usually cheer me up quickly.
Have you taken any music classes?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 句子结构不完整,语法错误明显。应使用完整的句子并补充细节,例如学习时间或内容,以展示语言能力。
Ví dụ: Yes, I’ve taken guitar lessons for about a year. I learned basic chords and simple songs, which helped me play along with my favorite tracks.
Do you listen to music while doing other things?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 注意连贯表达和标点使用,合并短句并提供具体例子来丰富答案。把“housework or. Reading”改为并列结构并补充喜欢在做哪些家务时听音乐。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I usually listen to music while doing housework, such as cleaning or cooking, and sometimes when I’m reading to create a relaxed atmosphere.
× Happy music make me feel more excited.
✓ Happy music makes me feel more excited.
动词与主语不一致。主语“Happy music”是第三人称单数,谓语动词需加 -s。建议记住一般现在时第三人称单数动词要加 -s(或不规则变化)。
× It makes me good.
✓ It makes me feel good.
用词错误。“make sb good”不自然,应使用动词短语“make someone feel good”(使某人感觉良好)。建议在描述感受时使用“feel + 形容词”。
× Guitar class I taken.
✓ I have taken a guitar class.
句子缺少助动词且词序错误。完成时态需用助动词“have/has”加过去分词,且主语在前。建议把主语置于句首并使用正确的完成时结构:I have taken a guitar class。
× Yes I do. I listen to music when I do housework or. Reading.
✓ Yes, I do. I listen to music when I do housework or read.
标点与句子结构错误。’or. Reading’ 分割不当,且动词形式不一致。并列活动需用并列动词形式:'do housework or read'。建议使用逗号分隔回应并保持并列动词时态和形式一致。
× I like K pop music because Blackpink is my hero.
✓ I like K-pop music because Blackpink are my heroes. / I like K-pop music because Blackpink is my favorite group.
“Blackpink”是一个女子组合,可视为复数(成员为多个)或作为单一团体名词。原句称其为“my hero”(单数)与语义不太匹配。两种更自然的表达:把团体视为复数用 'are my heroes',或把其作为单一团体称为 'my favorite group'。建议根据想表达的意思选择其中一种。