Music— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "so", "however") and correct verb forms. Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood; I enjoy both sad and happy songs. For example, when I want to relax and reflect I choose sad ballads because they feel calming, but when I need energy I pick upbeat pop songs to lift my spirits.

Gợi ý: Answer directly first, then give a specific example and correct tense/word forms. Avoid vague phrases like "extreme example" and name the item correctly. Use linking words such as "for example" or "because".

Ví dụ: Yes, happy music usually makes me feel more excited. For example, the upbeat soundtrack from the Despicable Me movies always cheers me up because of its fast tempo and lively instruments.

Gợi ý: Give a clear past-tense response and one brief reason. Use correct grammar (no double negatives) and simplify: state when you took the class, why it did not work out, and what you learned if anything. Keep it to two or three sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I took a music class in high school, but it was difficult for me. The lessons moved quickly and I lacked prior knowledge of songwriting, so I couldn't keep up with the teacher.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear topic sentence (yes/no), then list specific activities with correct verbs and linking words. Clarify exceptions (when you prefer silence). Avoid filler words like "literally" and check noun choices ("dishing" -> "washing dishes").

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually listen to music when I'm walking, cooking, or doing chores because it helps me focus and stay motivated. However, I prefer silence when I'm studying or doing homework because I need to concentrate.

× For me I think it is depend on that today my today mood like whether I am sad or happy on that moment.

✓ For me, I think it depends on my mood today, whether I am sad or happy at the moment.

The sentence uses incorrect verb form and awkward word order. 'is depend' should be 'depends' (subject-verb agreement, present simple). 'my today mood' is unnatural; use 'my mood today'. 'on that moment' should be 'at the moment'. Improve by using correct verb conjugation and natural phrase order.

× I love both type of song and care listening to either both sad or music too.

✓ I love both types of songs and enjoy listening to both sad and happy music.

'both type of song' is incorrect; use plural 'types of songs' for 'both'. 'care listening to' is incorrect verb choice; use 'enjoy listening to'. 'either both sad or music' is ungrammatical; clarify as 'both sad and happy music'. Ensure plural nouns and correct verb collocation.

× Yes, obviously, I think the extreme example for this question is the happy sound from the Disputable Me movie.

✓ Yes, obviously; I think an extreme example is the happy music from the Despicable Me movie.

'extreme example for this question' is awkward; 'an extreme example' is concise. 'happy sound' is better as 'happy music'. The movie title was misspelled ('Despicable Me'). Use articles appropriately and correct adjective-noun collocation.

× And I think when I listen to this song, I really excited.

✓ And I think when I listen to this song, I feel really excited.

Missing verb 'feel' to link subject and adjective; 'I really excited' is incorrect. In present tense, use 'I feel really excited' or 'I get really excited'. Add the appropriate verb for correct sentence structure.

× I used to take UH music class since my high school but it doesn't turn out so will because I didn't have no knowledge to make a song and teacher grow up so fast.

✓ I used to take a music class at UH when I was in high school, but it didn't turn out well because I didn't know how to write songs and the teacher progressed too quickly.

Mixed tenses and incorrect words: 'used to take' (past) should pair with past time 'when I was in high school' not 'since'. 'doesn't turn out so will' should be 'didn't turn out well' (past tense and spelling). Double negative 'didn't have no' should be 'didn't know' or 'had no'. 'teacher grow up so fast' should be 'the teacher progressed too quickly'. Use consistent past tense and correct vocabulary.

× I didn't catch that.

✓ I couldn't keep up.

'I didn't catch that' is sometimes acceptable in spoken English but here 'couldn't keep up' more accurately expresses inability to follow the fast-paced teaching. It corrects tense/modal nuance and provides a clearer collocation.

× Yes I usually listening to music while I do think that literally quite much concentration like walking or maybe cooking or dishing, but sometime when I do homework I will prefer silent more.

✓ Yes, I usually listen to music while doing activities that require little concentration, like walking, cooking, or washing dishes, but sometimes when I do homework I prefer it to be quiet.

Multiple present tense and form errors: 'I usually listening' should be 'I usually listen' (base verb for habitual action). 'while I do think that literally quite much concentration' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is 'activities that require little concentration'. 'dishing' should be 'washing dishes'. 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'I will prefer silent more' should be 'I prefer it to be quiet' or 'I prefer silence'. Use correct verb forms, plural nouns, adverbs, and clearer phrasing.