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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer sad or happy music?

Thí sinh

I think I prefer happy music because the body dislike the happy atmosphere and I think umm the tears is so bad for everyone.

Giám khảo

Does happy music make you feel more excited?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I think the happy new day is coming to me, uh, very more excited, uh, umm, for example, when people feel tired or sad and the happy music can play umm, umm, good role to everyone.

Giám khảo

Have you taken any music classes?

Thí sinh

No, my major is education, so the music classes is not my major and uh, not uh, on my classes. So I, I never take any music classes, but umm, I'm very interested.

Giám khảo

Do you listen to music while doing other things?

Thí sinh

Yeah, umm, I'm reading, studying or sleeping. I product to listen some soft music, umm, when I feel too happy or umm, I prefer that to.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you prefer sad or happy music?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答要直接且自然。先用一句话明确回应(I prefer happy music),然后给出具体、相关的理由并用连接词衔接。注意语法(body → people/body dislikes; tears is → tears are)和词汇搭配(dislike the happy atmosphere 表达不自然)。避免犹豫词(umm)和重复。建议练习把观点浓缩在2-3句内:第一句表明偏好,第二句给出一两个具体原因或例子。

Ví dụ: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and helps me relax. For example, when I’m stressed after work, upbeat songs make me feel more energetic and optimistic.

Does happy music make you feel more excited?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答要简洁且逻辑清晰。先肯定或否定(Yes, it does),然后解释原因并给具体情境。避免含糊或不地道的表达(the happy new day is coming to me;play good role)。使用连接词(because, for example, so)使句子连贯。控制句子数量为2-3句,减少填充词。

Ví dụ: Yes, happy music does make me feel more excited because upbeat rhythms and positive lyrics boost my energy. For example, when I’m tired, listening to lively songs helps me feel awake and more motivated.

Have you taken any music classes?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答结构基本正确,先直接回答(No),然后解释原因并补充兴趣是很好的做法。但需要改正语法(music classes is → are; not on my classes → not part of my course)并去除重复和犹豫词。可以在第二句加入简短补充说明兴趣的表现(e.g. I listen to music often or I want to take classes in the future)。保持2-3句。

Ví dụ: No, I haven’t taken any music classes because my major is education and my course requirements don’t include them. However, I’m very interested in music and hope to take an elective class in the future.

Do you listen to music while doing other things?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更清晰并使用恰当词汇(product to listen → prefer to listen; when I feel too happy → when I feel too stressed/when I want to relax)。先回答(Yes),然后列举常做的活动并说明偏好音乐类型及原因。用连接词如 and, because 使句子顺畅。减少犹豫词并避免模糊表述。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often listen to music while reading, studying or falling asleep. I prefer soft, relaxing music because it helps me concentrate and wind down.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of verbs / Subject-verb agreement

× I think I prefer happy music because the body dislike the happy atmosphere and I think umm the tears is so bad for everyone.

I think I prefer happy music because the body dislikes the happy atmosphere and I think, umm, tears are so bad for everyone.

问题类型对应:主谓一致/动词形式错误(Grammar Problem Type ID 27/1/2相关但最接近的是主谓一致)。解释:句中主语“the body”与动词“dislike”人称数不匹配,应为“dislikes”;另外“the tears is”主语“tears”为复数,谓语应为复数形式“are”。建议:确认主语是单数还是复数并使用相应的动词形式;读句子时注意把定冠词“the”是否必要。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs / Sentence structure

× Yeah, I think the happy new day is coming to me, uh, very more excited, uh, umm, for example, when people feel tired or sad and the happy music can play umm, umm, good role to everyone.

Yeah, I think a happy new day is coming, and I feel much more excited. For example, when people feel tired or sad, happy music can play a good role for everyone.

问题类型对应:词类使用不当与句子结构错误(Grammar Problem Type ID 13 和 26)。解释:原句中“the happy new day is coming to me”结构不自然,应该说“a happy new day is coming”或“I feel a new happy day is coming”。“very more excited”是错误的比较结构,应使用“much more excited”或“very excited”。“play umm, umm, good role to everyone”搭配不当,应为“play a good role for everyone”。建议:使用自然的名词短语(a happy new day),比较级用“much more”或“much”,并用固定搭配“play a role for”或“play a good role in …”。

Article errors / Subject-verb agreement

× No, my major is education, so the music classes is not my major and uh, not uh, on my classes. So I, I never take any music classes, but umm, I'm very interested.

No, my major is education, so music classes are not my major and they are not in my curriculum. So I have never taken any music classes, but I'm very interested.

问题类型对应:冠词/句子结构及主谓一致错误(Grammar Problem Type ID 22 和 27)。解释:不需要在“music classes”前加定冠词“the”;“music classes”是复数,谓语应使用“are”而非“is”。“not on my classes”表达不自然,应改为“not in my curriculum”或“not part of my classes”。过去经历应使用现在完成时“have never taken”表示至今未曾做过某事。建议:注意可数名词的冠词使用,复数主语用复数动词,并根据时间状语选择正确时态(“never”+现在完成时)。

Verb + -ing form / Incorrect verb choice

× Yeah, umm, I'm reading, studying or sleeping. I product to listen some soft music, umm, when I feel too happy or umm, I prefer that to.

Yeah, umm, I read, study, or sleep while listening to music. I prefer to listen to some soft music when I feel very happy, and I prefer that too.

问题类型对应:动名词/不定式使用与词汇错误(Grammar Problem Type ID 8)。解释:“I'm reading, studying or sleeping”在泛指习惯时更自然用一般现在时“I read, study, or sleep”或“I listen to music while reading, studying, or sleeping。”“I product to listen”不是正确表达,应为“I prefer to listen”或“I tend to listen” 。“when I feel too happy”中“too”通常表示过度,改为“very happy”更合适;“I prefer that to”中“to”应为“too”(也/同样)。建议:区分进行时与一般现在时的使用场景,使用正确动词(prefer)和固定搭配(prefer to do / prefer ... to ...),以及注意拼写(too vs to)。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BadSubstandard; Harmful; Unpleasant; Inauspicious; Severe
ExcitedThrilled; Aroused
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
InterestedAttentive; Concerned; Partisan
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
SadUnhappy; Tragic; Unfortunate
SoftMushy; Swampy; Squashy; Velvety; Gentle
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