Music— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using correct verb forms and linking words. Avoid redundancy (e.g. "music" repeated unnecessarily).

Ví dụ: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and gives me positive energy. For example, upbeat pop songs help me feel more motivated after a long day.

Gợi ý: Give a direct yes/no response followed by a concise explanation with a linking word. Use correct tense and avoid vague phrases like "too curious." Provide a specific effect and an example of when it helps you.

Ví dụ: Yes, it definitely does. Happy songs usually boost my energy and cheer me up, for instance when I feel down I play lively music and soon feel more optimistic and motivated.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer and a short explanation. Fix tense and sentence structure; avoid incomplete clauses. If you have plans or reasons, state them briefly with a linking word.

Ví dụ: No, I haven't taken any formal music classes. I tried learning informally by watching online tutorials because I didn't have time for regular lessons.

Gợi ý: Respond directly and use a clear topic sentence followed by specific examples. Use correct continuous tense where needed and linking words (e.g. "for example"). Avoid awkward phrases like "resonates my mind."

Ví dụ: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other tasks. For example, I play relaxing playlists when gardening or cooking because the music helps me concentrate and feel calm.

× Well I enjoy all happy music, it give me the positive vibes of the music and also change my moods.

✓ Well, I enjoy all happy music; it gives me positive vibes and also changes my mood.

Plural/quantifier and subject-verb agreement errors: 'all happy music' is unnatural—use 'all happy music' can stay but 'positive vibes of the music' is awkward; better 'positive vibes'. 'it give' is wrong for third person singular; use 'it gives'. 'change my moods' should be 'changes my mood' to match singular subject and idiomatic usage. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement (singular subject -> verb+s) and use natural collocations ('positive vibes', 'change my mood').

× Yes definitely happy music makes me more extra excited and give me more feeling about too curious and also change my moods when I got sad.

✓ Yes, definitely happy music makes me more excited, makes me feel curious, and also changes my mood when I am sad.

Several issues: 'make' must agree with third person singular subject 'happy music' so use 'makes' (third person singular). 'give me more feeling about too curious' is ungrammatical; better 'makes me feel curious'. 'change my moods' should be 'changes my mood' to agree with singular subject. 'when I got sad' mixes tenses; the correct habitual meaning is present: 'when I am sad'. Suggestion: apply subject-verb agreement, use correct verbs for feelings ('makes me feel'), and keep consistent present tense for habitual actions.

× No, I didn't take any music classes off to learn music or to sing a music as I'm a.

✓ No, I haven't taken any music classes to learn music or to sing, because I'm self-taught.

Tense and structure problems: 'didn't take' is simple past but the intended meaning likely concerns experience up to now—use present perfect 'haven't taken'. 'off to learn' is incorrect; use 'to learn'. 'sing a music' is wrong—'sing' takes no article: 'to sing' or 'to sing songs'. The clause 'as I'm a' is incomplete; supply explanation like 'because I'm self-taught' or remove it. Suggestion: use present perfect for life experiences, remove unnecessary words ('a' before 'music'), and complete fragments.

× Yes, I'm doing. When I'm doing a work like a gardening or anything, then I'm you listening the music to keep me calm and also resonates my mind.

✓ Yes, I do. When I'm doing work like gardening or other tasks, I listen to music to keep calm and because it resonates with me.

Incorrect verb forms and pronouns: 'I'm doing' is unnatural; use 'I do' for habitual actions. 'a work' is wrong—use 'work' (uncountable) or 'a task'. 'a gardening' is wrong—use 'gardening'. 'then I'm you listening the music' is ungrammatical and has a stray pronoun 'you'; correct to 'I listen to music'. 'resonates my mind' is unnatural; say 'resonates with me'. Keep present simple for habitual actions and correct collocations. Suggestion: use present simple for routines, remove stray pronouns, and use 'resonate with'.