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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer sad or happy music?

Thí sinh

Well that depends. When I feel unhappy I will listen to sad music, but normally I prefer happy music.

Giám khảo

Does happy music make you feel more excited?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course. Sometimes if I stay at home alone, I will listen to happy music and dance.

Giám khảo

Have you taken any music classes?

Thí sinh

To be honest, I haven't take any professional music classes, but if it's music class in school, yes.

Giám khảo

Do you listen to music while doing other things?

Thí sinh

Yes, mostly when I'm taking shower I like to play some music.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you prefer sad or happy music?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 总体回答直接且自然,但语言有小错误且可扩展细节以显得更具体。注意动词时态(例如“haven't take”应为“haven't taken”),避免冗长,并在必要时用连接词使句子更流畅。可以把偏好原因补充进来,例如描述音乐带来的情绪效果或具体曲风。

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood. If I'm feeling down, I usually choose sad songs because they help me process my emotions; otherwise I prefer upbeat pop or electronic music because it lifts my energy and makes me want to move.

Does happy music make you feel more excited?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答简洁且相关,但可以更具体地说明“how”或“why” happy music excites you,并使用连接词使表述更连贯。也可以给出频率或具体场景,以展示更丰富的内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Happy music usually has a fast tempo and catchy melodies, so it boosts my mood and energy; for example, when I'm home alone I often play upbeat tracks and dance for 10–15 minutes to feel more cheerful.

Have you taken any music classes?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接但有语法错误('haven't take'→'haven't taken'),句子结构可以更清晰。可以补充更多细节,比如在学校学过哪些内容、是否学过乐器或歌唱、以及是否想学专业课程。使用连接词如“however”或“but”使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: To be honest, I haven't taken any professional music lessons. I did have music classes at school where I learned basic theory and sang in the choir, but I haven't learned an instrument formally.

Do you listen to music while doing other things?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答简短且自然,但可以更具体说明其他常见场景(如做家务、学习或通勤)和原因(例如帮助放松或集中注意力),并注意小语法改进('taking shower'→'taking a shower')。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Mostly I play music while taking a shower because it relaxes me, and I also listen to playlists when I'm cooking or commuting to help me focus and pass the time.

Ngữ pháp

Modal verb usage

× When I feel unhappy I will listen to sad music, but normally I prefer happy music.

When I feel unhappy I listen to sad music, but normally I prefer happy music.

这里不需要使用将来时“will”。表示习惯或一般情况时应使用一般现在时。将“will listen”改为“listen”。建议:描述习惯或经常发生的事情用一般现在时,例如“I listen to sad music when I feel unhappy.”

Modal verb usage

× Sometimes if I stay at home alone, I will listen to happy music and dance.

Sometimes if I stay at home alone, I listen to happy music and dance.

同样表示习惯或在特定条件下常做的事情,不应使用“will”。应使用一般现在时表示常态或习惯行为。建议:把“will listen”改为“listen”。

Verb in the past participle form

× To be honest, I haven't take any professional music classes, but if it's music class in school, yes.

To be honest, I haven't taken any professional music classes, but if it's a music class in school, yes.

在现在完成时中应使用动词过去分词形式,‘take’的过去分词是‘taken’。另外在“music class”前加不定冠词“a”更符合英语习惯。建议:使用现在完成时结构‘I haven't taken’并在可数名词前加冠词。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, mostly when I'm taking shower I like to play some music.

Yes, mostly when I'm taking a shower I like to play some music.

短语“take a shower”需要冠词“a”,这里是固定搭配。将“taking shower”改为“taking a shower”。建议:记住常见短语的固定搭配,如“take a shower”“have a shower”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
SadUnhappy; Tragic; Unfortunate
UnhappyUnfortunate; Dissatisfied
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