Music— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer sad or happy music?
Thí sinh
Honestly, I prefer happy music just because it be my motivation and it make my day most beautiful and memorable. For instance, I use it to play happy music all day whenever I'm travelling or doing something work or maybe going with my friends on somewhere.
Giám khảo
Does happy music make you feel more excited?
Thí sinh
Yeah, definitely. It helped me to maintain discipline and also improve my motivation when it seems like low for instance, I am doing my homework when I get in fully tried I I usually prefer to listen some music, the kind of music, happy music, because I want to reduce my stress.
Giám khảo
Have you taken any music classes?
Thí sinh
No, I haven't take any music classes yet, but in the future when I achieve my goals and I set the future, maybe I attend music concert because I love music. As I told you, I listen every time I connected music with my day.
Giám khảo
Do you listen to music while doing other things?
Thí sinh
Of course I do. I often listen music when while going homework or work. For instance, whenever I am doing something for a long period, I often listen music. It helps me to complete the work under the time and reduce my stress.
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Part 1
Do you prefer sad or happy music?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: Make your answer grammatically correct, more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and awkward phrasing. Also correct verb forms (e.g., “it makes” not “it make”) and prepositions (e.g., “when I’m travelling” not “on somewhere”).
Ví dụ: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and motivates me. For example, when I’m travelling or spending time with friends I play upbeat songs to make the day more memorable and energising.
Does happy music make you feel more excited?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and one specific example. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct tense/grammar (e.g., “helps” not “helped”, “when I feel tired” not “when I get in fully tried”). Keep to two or three sentences to be natural and effective.
Ví dụ: Yes, it does. Happy music helps me stay motivated and reduces stress; for instance, when I feel tired doing homework I put on upbeat songs to boost my energy and focus.
Have you taken any music classes?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly with correct grammar (e.g., “I haven't taken” not “haven't take”). If mentioning future plans, be specific and concise. Avoid vague phrases like “when I achieve my goals and I set the future.”
Ví dụ: No, I haven't taken any music classes yet. In the future I might attend a music course or a concert because I love music and want to learn more about it.
Do you listen to music while doing other things?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: Provide a concise topic sentence and one specific example. Correct collocations and grammar (e.g., “listen to music,” “doing homework or working”). Use linking words like “for example” or “so” to connect reason and result.
Ví dụ: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other tasks. For example, when I’m doing homework or long periods of work I play background music because it helps me concentrate and reduces stress.
Ngữ pháp
× Honestly, I prefer happy music just because it be my motivation and it make my day most beautiful and memorable.
✓ Honestly, I prefer happy music just because it is my motivation and it makes my day more beautiful and memorable.
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