Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer sad or happy music?
Thí sinh
Neither of them are like rock music.
Giám khảo
Does happy music make you feel more excited?
Thí sinh
Yes, I feel more excited when I listening happy music in the life.
Giám khảo
Have you taken any music classes?
Thí sinh
No, I haven't take any music classes. Uh, I only listening. I only listen to music. I don't professional any music skills.
Giám khảo
Do you listen to music while doing other things?
Thí sinh
I always listen to Malik we're doing adding things such as working drawing, take bus, uh, make any car. I often listen to music. I I think the music gives gives me confidence umm anytime.
Do you prefer sad or happy music?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不直接,语法错误较多,内容信息量小。应先直接回答喜欢哪种或说明都不喜欢,然后补充原因或具体偏好,并使用正确语法和连词。例如注意主谓一致、使用完整句子。
Ví dụ: I don't especially prefer sad or happy music; I mainly enjoy rock music because of its energy. For example, I like guitar-driven songs that make me feel energized and focused when I work.
Does happy music make you feel more excited?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答方向正确但有语法和用词错误,句子不流畅。应用简单正确时态(listen -> listening/listen),并加一两句具体细节,用连接词衔接结果或原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, happy music usually makes me feel more excited. When I listen to upbeat songs, I feel more energetic and motivated, so I often play them when I'm exercising or getting ready to go out.
Have you taken any music classes?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 语法错误严重,表达混乱,信息不完整。应用现在完成时的正确形式(haven't taken),并解释你的学习方式或理由,使用一到两句支持细节。
Ví dụ: No, I haven't taken any music classes; I mostly learn by listening. For instance, I learn songs by ear from recordings and watch online tutorials instead of formal lessons.
Do you listen to music while doing other things?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 答案表达含糊且有许多口误,句子结构混乱。应先给出直接回答,然后列举具体活动并用连词连接,避免重复词语,注意单词选择(e.g. 'on the bus', 'while working').
Ví dụ: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other things. For example, I listen when I'm drawing, commuting on the bus, or doing housework, because music helps me concentrate and feel more confident.
× Neither of them are like rock music.
✓ Neither of them is like rock music.
“Neither”作主语时视为单数,动词需用单数形式“is”。建议:遇到 neither/of either 等结构,动词用单数。例如:Neither of the options is suitable.
× Yes, I feel more excited when I listening happy music in the life.
✓ Yes, I feel more excited when I listen to happy music in life.
原句中主语是 I,动词应为原形 listen 而不是现在分词 listening;另外 listen 后需接介词 to,短语 in life 更自然。建议:第三人称以外使用一般现在时态时用动词原形;listen 要搭配 to。
× No, I haven't take any music classes.
✓ No, I haven't taken any music classes.
这是现在完成时(have + 过去分词),play动词需用过去分词 taken 而不是原形 take。建议:现在完成时结构为 have/has + 过去分词。
× Uh, I only listening.
✓ Uh, I only listen.
这里表示习惯动作,应使用一般现在时 listen 而不是现在分词 listening。建议:描述经常性行为用一般现在时(I listen)。
× I only listen to music.
✓ I only listen to music.
原句语法上正确,无需改动。此处作为对前句的更正已保持正确结构。
× I don't professional any music skills.
✓ I don't have any professional music skills.
原句缺少动词 have,且 professional 作形容词需修饰名词 music skills,语序为 have + any + adjective + noun。建议:使用 have 表示拥有技能。
× I always listen to Malik we're doing adding things such as working drawing, take bus, uh, make any car.
✓ I always listen to music when I'm doing various things such as working, drawing, taking the bus or riding in a car.
原句有多处错误:'Malik' 可能为拼写错误应为 music;'we're doing adding things' 结构不对,应为 when I'm doing various things;动词形式需统一,take bus 应为 taking the bus,make any car 不自然,应为 riding in a car 或 in the car。建议:列举进行的活动时用 when + 主语 + be + -ing 或动名词形式(doing, drawing, taking)。
× I often listen to music. I I think the music gives gives me confidence umm anytime.
✓ I often listen to music. I think the music gives me confidence anytime.
原句存在重复词 gives gives 和多余的填充词 umm;句子结构本身正确,但要去掉重复和口语填充。建议:说话时注意避免重复词,保持句子简洁。