Music— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the sentence grammatically correct, start with a clear topic sentence, and add a brief specific reason. Use a linking phrase to show contrast.

Ví dụ: I prefer happy music most of the time because it lifts my mood. However, sometimes I choose sad songs when I want to reflect or calm down.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and make the response concise. Start with a direct answer, then give one specific effect and a short example using a linking word.

Ví dụ: Yes, happy music makes me feel more energetic. For example, upbeat songs help me wake up in the morning and motivate me to exercise.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and avoid repetition. Provide a clear time reference and one supporting detail about what you learned or enjoyed. Use a linking word to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I took music classes in middle school where I learned basic music theory and sang in a choir. As a result, I became more confident singing in public.

Gợi ý: Make verbs grammatically correct and list activities clearly using linking words. Provide a short specific detail about how music helps you in those situations.

Ví dụ: Yes, I listen to music while cleaning, walking, or taking the bus. It helps me stay focused when I clean and makes commutes feel shorter.

× 'I usually listen happy music but sometimes it depends on my mood.'

✓ 'I usually listen to happy music, but sometimes it depends on my mood.'

'Listen' requires the preposition 'to' before its object when referring to audio. Also add a comma before 'but' to join two independent clauses. Suggestion: remember verbs that need prepositions (listen to, depend on).'

× 'Happy music makes me feel like I'm more energetic, energetic.'

✓ 'Happy music makes me feel more energetic.'

'Like' is unnecessary here and repeating 'energetic' is redundant. Place the adverb 'more' immediately before the adjective 'energetic' to form the comparative. Suggestion: say 'feel more energetic' or 'make me feel energetic.'

× 'In middle school, I take music classes and I sing.'

✓ 'In middle school, I took music classes and I sang.'

The time reference 'In middle school' sets the action in the past, so verbs should be in the past tense. Use 'took' and 'sang' as the past forms. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time expression.

× 'I listen music while I'm cleaning my house and walking or take a bus.'

✓ 'I listen to music while I'm cleaning my house, walking, or taking a bus.'

'Listen' requires the preposition 'to' before 'music'. Parallel activities should use parallel verb forms: 'cleaning,' 'walking,' and 'taking a bus.' Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: keep verbs in the same -ing form when listing simultaneous activities.'